Very awesomely drawn!

thank you

Goddamn that dynamic pose looks good, even in thumbnail. I can't ever get stuff like this right.

The trick I use is to just forget about the proportion after the torso is angled and then start placing the limbs. Honestly if they did that marvel spidergirl breakdown of this it would probably be a misshapen monster. Taking out one of the most important tips in fitting the entire subject in the frame also helps it pop. Makes it feel like it is coming towards you when there is only one part of it missing off the edge or disproportionately large in comparison to the rest of the piece.