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Foolish Pride

by TidetheCat69 Writer

20 years ago

Here's the Emo as promised. I wrote this on a depressed night in my Disney apartment in 2004, and revised it tonight. This one also hints at a character from the series I have yet to start on. Milo is based on my high school's mascot, Victor E. Panther, I felt it somewhat fitting in a way, most likly cause it was my schools mascot and at the time i was emo, who can tell? anyway, I hope it's alright.

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Category Sub-Category Species Resolution File Size Story Miscellaneous Panther 50 x 50 26.5 kB

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male u_tidethecat69 c_story t_miscellaneous s_panther

Hanzo ~hanzo

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20 years ago

Milo and I have some things in Common. Thankfully I have you to supress my emotions. I love you, and hope to have you forever

TidetheCat69 ~tidethecat69

Writer

20 years ago

what i really like about this short story, is that you don't know why he's crying or what The Rouge really has to do with him, nor who he is. It's not actually too easy to identify with him without knowing what's up...but only I do, though I may explain later or write more on it.

Symos_Eno ~symoseno

Writer

20 years ago

Nice prolouge...
It's mysterious and grabbed me immediately.
One thing I did notice were a few errors (spelling), but I'm a freak for that kinda stuff. ;P

Great work dude, and keep it up.

TidetheCat69 ~tidethecat69

Writer

20 years ago

it happens, no one's purrr-fect, spell check can only do so much

naota-daemon ~naota-daemon

Anthro Artist

20 years ago

wow, I really liked this story. it seemed a bit shorter than I expected, or at least it was shorter then I hoped. It was really good, I felt like it was the beggining to a game.

TidetheCat69 ~tidethecat69

Writer

20 years ago

wow...thank you, sorry...I hand write this stuff first, and it turns out to be shorter when typed

naota-daemon ~naota-daemon

Anthro Artist

20 years ago

that's ok. I understand, when I write the same thing happens when I rewrite it on the computer.

TidetheCat69 ~tidethecat69

Writer

20 years ago

sadly, I did that before each post (rewriting it), some turned out shorter. Ever got to the point where all that can be said is said...I hate that spot...would rather be next door on "too much" point.

lucien_odin_godsline ~lucienodingodsline

Art Whore

19 years ago

Nice work, story is intriguing. It's a bit tough to read, as you jump from thought to thought, but that's minor. What's important is you have a good, creative concept. Keep it up, hope to see more!