oh nice. something tells me that diaper is extremely snug X3

And extra soft to the scales. :)

I hope he wont need the bathroom :3

maybe get him to dance too? X3

The rest of the poem is open for reader interpretation.

Though I'm sure he wouldn't mind doing a little dance with Rarity. Preferably a slow one. :)

slow to silence the crinkles? :3

Perhaps. ;)

It's all up to the imagination.

would you wear that outfit? :3

Yosh? Hmm. I suppose it would depend on the situation he'd be in.

Actually Yosh has a phase where he dresses up like a girl to try and get attention back he feels his baby sister is taking away from him.

As for a tux and a diaper I think it could stylishly be pulled off on Yosh. :)

Tux and diapah X3. would his mom allow that? :3

how about a diaper tux? =)

<LoL!> I'm sure someone around here has thought of or drawn a diaper tux.

There was a time when I saw some artists draw cakes that looked like diapers. They were obviously marble style with a mix of brown and yellow when you cut into them.

Someone either photoshopped or actually made a real life wedding dress out of diapers. Could you imagine that going down the aisle?

As for Yosh I guarantee his mom and dad would be all for him just wearing a tuxedo and his diapers. Especially if it were at a wedding where he was the ring bearer and a previous accident in his diapers made his dress pants unusable. :)

hehehe Even if the Accident was done on purpose? X3

Depends on the situation.

When Yosh's sister, Winry, is born he gets very jealous of her. For how she can go whenever she wants is one matter while the biggest is how mom and dad seem to not have as much time for him.

welp, thats when Yosh start to Rebel eh?

Though, how does Yosh feel when he is being babysat by Lanny's mom?

Nervous / Bashful.

Yosh is a nerdy, shy kid who grows up as a geek. His hybrid appearance often being teased.

His sister, Winry, his far more headstrong while making it a point to always stick up for her brother while making anyone who picks on them for being hybrids know they better walk the walk if they talk the talk.

so what is it about Lanny's mom that makes him Nervous and Bashful? :3

It's just Yosh's character. He also is a bit timid in the fact he has taken a liking to diapers, too.

and the Fact that Lanny's mom will allow him to wear diapers on certain occasions?

awwwwww that's a super cute Poem

I'm really glad you have enjoyed this series of poems. :)

I've had lots of cute thoughts but my creativity level hasn't been up to writing full stories yet. So doing the poems help me get out what I'd like to write without having to be so bound by the laws of building up to an event and then winding down from it.

A part of me wants to get enough of these done so I can post the lot on FiM Fiction. Though I think I've run out of ideas that would properly fit or not seem forced.

Do you think there is anything cute I could still do with Spike? :)

hum.......i'm not to sure maybe do some poems with the other pony's and have Spike as the main part of the Poems like say try one with fluttershy next

That could work. Thanks for the suggestion.

Fluttershy is definitely a very maternal Pony who also is full of depth. She actually is the member of the Mane 6 I relate with most.

Is there a character from the show you relate with?

well the one i relate to the most wood have to be Twilight Sparkle she and i both love to learn and read

Ooh! A great choice. A willingness, especially a liking, to read and learn is wonderful.

Being on FA has taught me how important an Open Mind is. If you come here expecting the world to revolve around you it is not going to happen. Though this is also for anywhere.

Lots of amazing people are here to learn from and befriend if you just allow yourself to be open, tolerant, and understanding. :)

yup that's a good way to look at it

It makes me very happy to hear you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. :)

Okay, it's cute and all, but from a writing standpoint, your parameter is all over the place. I'm not trying to be mean, but when you're writing a poem like this, you really want to make sure to keep a consistent 'beat' as it were; otherwise, it becomes difficult to read.

*Nods* Thanks for the input. Poetry isn't my strong point so criticism is certainly most welcome.

For this I went with raw feeling over common sense. Though your mentioning the "Rhythm" makes me think on how song lyrics work so I know right where you are coming from in this critique.

Thanks for your time. If I do any additional work I hope to improve upon this as poetry is frontier I'd like to venture more into at some point. :)

No problem. Also, keep in mind that you're not necessarily limited to one kind. If you want to convey a feeling more than anything, I would suggest free verse, maybe. Anyway, keep practicing and writing! That's the best way to get better.

Free verse would definitely be a great way to go. Rhyming isn't typically my strong point. Unless it's making a pun. I do well making puns. :)

Thanks again for the insights. I'll keep trying. It's the only way to get better. That and being open minded when getting a solid critique, like yours. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Lighty. I'm just trying to get warmed up for other works.

Though it doesn't hurt to work on poetry. It is definitely one of my weaker points in writing. *kushi kushi*

This is such a cute poem x3 Simple, yet very well written.

I thank you oh-so very much for taking the time to read this piece. Your comment means a lot.

If you'd ever be interested in a much easier way to read what I've done in the world of Pony please visit my FiM Fiction page at http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=133354.

FA isn't as sophisticated in organizing Chapters or allowing a post to feature text that is properly spaced or tabbed. So I put what work I did here with the hope of those who may be interested in reading it to have a better chance of enjoying it without so much hassle. :)

I often didn't get a lot of positive comments but I am thankful for those kind words I did get. The Bronies don't really seem to like me all that much so I'm going to do all my other Pony stuff here on FA but most of what I've done is on FiM Fiction and enjoyably accessible. :)

I'm looking forward to enjoying more of your arts as you find time to create and post them. It's good to see you again, too. :)