Very, very interesting idea. Hmmmm.

It just came to me, what can I say? :O

Just wait till I find someone to do "Melting California" with.

I loved the first part TW... totally pulled me in with just the few paragraphs...

the melting part... believe it or not - the very first full story I did, th main character melted from the rain.

*makes a face in remembrance. I got a really nice rejection letter for that one and they would have accepted the story had I changed the ending - but I showed them... I refused to change it!

*gives him a hug...

V.

osnap! :O nothing is original! *hugs*

silly... this was original... mine was totally different - it was just that he melted...

V.

:P

Hmm. Interesting character, interesting idea. I do wonder, though, how does he keep clean without being able to shower?

You're reading too much into it. D:

Well, I guess the answer would be that people say you'll melt in the rain, but never in the shower.

Interesting. Twisted. Deranged. I laughed. There's cruel irony in this story. I know children can fear rain so that it is impossible to go out in a rain. People fear the strangest things. But the story... very well written, interesting, amusing, this little piece is very entertaining, I enjoyed reading it.

Interesting that you mention children, I never did say how old our protagonist is. ;D