It's kind of a theme with these that I'm rather dissatisfied with them. This time, I had a good start (based on something I wanted to do to a girl in high school; glad I didn't) that didn't have a good ending.
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Yeah, the last paragraph does just kind of fade out there... *pauses, thinks* I guess I'm mostly curious about what he does (or doesn't do) after the threat is made. It might be interesting to keep things from her viewpoint and just push forward and find out what he does next. Does he try to make good on the threat? Does he wind up with Morgan and turn out to be a really great guy while Kacey ends up with some jerk instead? Does he wind up in a mental hospital endlessly folding little origami animals? Does he fold his suicide note into a crane? Okay, I'm getting a touch melodramatic there, but you get the idea.
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