"Somewhere, out there, an alien is getting laid, and you're not." - Barbara
Greetings I am Zoodis,
and Star Gazing, I like star gazing, I wish I have a telescope but sadly I live in a city that causes light pollution. Well live more into a urban area, like the streets yo. But thankfully my city is a bit small and not as bad as other big cities out there. I did lived in New Mexico for a couple of months and man what a view at nights, the stars everywhere, I even saw my first shooting star. Not telling you my wish though. But no E.Ts out there, sorry guys. :(
So then, let me know how I did, criticize if I need some improvements on coloring, shading, ya know, ect...
Greetings I am Zoodis,
and Star Gazing, I like star gazing, I wish I have a telescope but sadly I live in a city that causes light pollution. Well live more into a urban area, like the streets yo. But thankfully my city is a bit small and not as bad as other big cities out there. I did lived in New Mexico for a couple of months and man what a view at nights, the stars everywhere, I even saw my first shooting star. Not telling you my wish though. But no E.Ts out there, sorry guys. :(
So then, let me know how I did, criticize if I need some improvements on coloring, shading, ya know, ect...
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Dog (Other)
Size 850 x 1100px
File Size 219.3 kB
Lovely work! The expression in the eyes is great.
My suggestion would be if you're going to shade over the lines, maybe you should color the lines as well! It can be a little distracting if you see a black line underneath a light color for the shading.
Also, all your shadows seem to be one color...some shadows in some areas will be darker (under the head and hair, by the eyes and nose etc.). Just think about where light is least likely to hit, and make those parts darker; any areas that are covered by something opaque or form deep grooves will have darker shadows.
Very nice atmosphere though! I like how the stars are reflected in the eyes!
My suggestion would be if you're going to shade over the lines, maybe you should color the lines as well! It can be a little distracting if you see a black line underneath a light color for the shading.
Also, all your shadows seem to be one color...some shadows in some areas will be darker (under the head and hair, by the eyes and nose etc.). Just think about where light is least likely to hit, and make those parts darker; any areas that are covered by something opaque or form deep grooves will have darker shadows.
Very nice atmosphere though! I like how the stars are reflected in the eyes!
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