Thats pretty good! :) Love the contrasts in the piano vs drums. The quality is a little low tho imo.

Glad you like it :)

Intro is a bit too long. Besides low sample/recording quality, kinda sounds like the drums are clipping. There are points where both the rhythm and melody sections are between notes, and while that can be a useful tool, it kinda makes your track sound like it's skipping. Doesn't really jive with what you're trying to do otherwise.

Around 2:20 is where I really start to enjoy the song. You found a good balance between the instruments that generally continues on to the end. Otherwise, I wish you experimented and played around with the rhythm section more. You could have a very good song here with a bit more tweaking and some improvements in the sample quality.

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kk, enjoy!

Maybe the piano could be a bit slower and around 1:30 he could be a bit a bit louder.
I do enjoy this one very much. Maybe you could start a bit slower and growing faster with more "steps". Around 2:20 it's really great and at 3:17 it's almost an eargasm ;)
Then end is awesome.


Here, that may boost your creativity: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcEDw82vw1c
Enjoy :)