*Fantasia Lergiab* Mind? MIND?! The suggestion made the story better!

Your writing style is really intriguing. So descriptive and engaging and varied in how you express pretty much everything; a truly engaging read! While I appreciate you adding more to the story with the suggested transformation at the end, unfortunately (and you weren't to know), transformation isn't my cup of tea. >< But like I said, you weren't to know. Still, it does add to the story in the sense that something more could happen and certainly, for other readers, that makes this experience a lot more fun, that this story isn't over.

I'm really glad you've written this story for me. You have quite the talent for writing. A good read is something I enjoy a lot and this is a very good read. The range of language and writing technique you employ is staggering, making this just such a great story. Thank you so much for this!

As for my half, it's nearly there. I've just got some colours to go. I imagine it'll be submitted here tomorrow.

Thanks again for a wonderful trade opportunity!

Any time! It was fun to write!