This is really nice! I wouldn't say it's too chaotic at any point, it gets quite dramatic but doesn't go over the top.
I like how it develops, particularly how you introduce some phrases separately and then bring them together towards the end, all I'd say is don't neglect the other orchestral instrument families, switching up a few of the string parts with woodwinds or brass for repetitions is a good way to introduce some nice variety. :)
A really good composition overall, and I look forward to hearing more from you! :D

Oh, thank you! ^////^
I'm definitely going to try to get a better variety to the instruments, too! Sometimes it just doesn't want to work for me. Maybe because the audio quality of my headset sucks... It mostly sounds very terrible. But I'm going to buy new ones nonetheless. :D

But thanks, really! It's hard getting comments like this in the internet, 'cause mostly they're not very constructive. Yours definitely is. :3

You're welcome! :D

Yeah good headphones or speakers are a must, I've had my current headphones for a year and a half and the difference when I listen back through my old headphones is huge, I'm now attempting to save up for some decent speakers, I'm a very poor student though. :P

I'm glad you found my comment helpful, I really appreciate constructive criticism and I know how useful (and often sparse) it is, so I try my best to offer some where I can. :)