Contact me if you want something added in part three.
Also let me know what you think about it and what could be improved

Only thing I worry is, how were they at the mansion a week, and only now did Caleb get a pizza? Seems more of what would happen the day after they arrive. Aside from that, I really liked the quote "the weapon makes the wielder", seems to fit well with Garret. Heh, now what would Caleb use? Oh right, cuddles(typically I draw Caleb with daggers/swords)

Good description on the pizza, sounds quite delicious. “I wouldn’t want you to become a blob. Unless you want to be one, of course,” With how good the food is, that's a tough question to answer.

Now towards the end, I think Caleb would be worried to meet Darius' father. See what happens next! :)

I would've told you what happened during the week, but by the end of the story i had about 2000 words. I cut it shorter than i wanted to because i needed to save material for part 3. That was a little lazy of me. Speaking of part three, I am halfway done. Thank you for the feedback.