As I said in a journal, I've decided to make a real effort to write more stories. So here's the exciting tale of Zee-Zee and friends, and a scary buzzy thing!
In order of appearance:
Max belongs to
Maxis
Jerry belongs to
JerrytehMunk
Drake belongs to
Chris21
Kaffre belongs to
Kaffre
and the heard-of-but-not-seen caretakers:
Warren belongs to
Lig
Raikan belongs to
Raikan
In order of appearance:
Max belongs to
MaxisJerry belongs to
JerrytehMunkDrake belongs to
Chris21Kaffre belongs to
Kaffreand the heard-of-but-not-seen caretakers:
Warren belongs to
LigRaikan belongs to
Raikan
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 103px
File Size 11.3 kB
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How very cute and unique. You can definately tell that there is more to the characters and their world than what goes on within the confines of a single story. Actually, I do believe such tales are quite heart warming in that they really capture that spirit that little ones have at such an innocent age.
Something else I find fun is how you manage to incorporate your friends on here into the story. I have thought about doing a work of this nature, but always fear I wouldn't do those I would include in it justice. I do hope all of your friends enjoyed reading this as much as I did.
Another fun note I must make is how the character actions bring me back to the glorious days of shows like "Pocket Dragon Adventures." The characters in your story, like in PDA, are all unique and effect the main character in oh-so different ways. I also can't help to compare it to the show "Captain Flamingo," too. Have you ever seen it? If so, Zee's role is similar to CF's in that he is a master of so many situations, but it is his friends who make the magic happen. Sadly, this show gets very little attention, if any.
Overall, I enjoyed the tale and how well the story flowed. It's hard to find stories online that flow as well as this. I am looking forward to reading over the next one. ;)
Something else I find fun is how you manage to incorporate your friends on here into the story. I have thought about doing a work of this nature, but always fear I wouldn't do those I would include in it justice. I do hope all of your friends enjoyed reading this as much as I did.
Another fun note I must make is how the character actions bring me back to the glorious days of shows like "Pocket Dragon Adventures." The characters in your story, like in PDA, are all unique and effect the main character in oh-so different ways. I also can't help to compare it to the show "Captain Flamingo," too. Have you ever seen it? If so, Zee's role is similar to CF's in that he is a master of so many situations, but it is his friends who make the magic happen. Sadly, this show gets very little attention, if any.
Overall, I enjoyed the tale and how well the story flowed. It's hard to find stories online that flow as well as this. I am looking forward to reading over the next one. ;)
If these stories are a success, it's because of the supporting cast. I'm so lucky to have so many friends with cute fursonas whose personalities fit the stories I want to tell. That was especially true with "Elementary!" - I thought up the basic plot, posted a comment on a forum asking if anybody wanted to be included in the story and just used everyone who replied over the next couple of hours. And they all fitted in perfectly!
I've never seen Captain Flamingo, but I'm going to have to check it out!
I've never seen Captain Flamingo, but I'm going to have to check it out!
How impressive, Zoom. The fact that you were able to take quick descriptions from a number of people and put them into a solid story form in your style so successfully is quite impressive. Honestly, I don't believe I could do anything like that.
Captain Flamingo is a show that was part of the JETIX TV block. It started in Canada, though. I just happened upon it one day and was hooked ever since. Sadly, they moved it to a time I can't catch it anymore.
Basically, the hero is a boy named Milo Powell. He is most certainly under the age of 10 and acts as the neighborhood superhero. The cute aspect of it is how genuinely he believes in his "abilities" and how a little girl he hangs out with is his sidekick. It's something that, for me anyway, after watching it you could actually see a little kid doing in real life. The power of imagination and determination are quite amazing in it.
Captain Flamingo is a show that was part of the JETIX TV block. It started in Canada, though. I just happened upon it one day and was hooked ever since. Sadly, they moved it to a time I can't catch it anymore.
Basically, the hero is a boy named Milo Powell. He is most certainly under the age of 10 and acts as the neighborhood superhero. The cute aspect of it is how genuinely he believes in his "abilities" and how a little girl he hangs out with is his sidekick. It's something that, for me anyway, after watching it you could actually see a little kid doing in real life. The power of imagination and determination are quite amazing in it.
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