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Hi! After looking through your gallery, I’ve found that I like your art style. I think it’s very unique and it stands out from other fanart in the Sonic fandom. So talking about style and quality of drawing, this drawing is pretty good (Though I think it could look better if the shading wasn’t so solid and was blended) I just have some problems with the context of the picture.
Personally, I see romance as something that is give and take and is not forced on someone and is returned happily. The context the “romance” in this picture holds is not true romance in my opinion. I can understand that the intention of this picture was to show love between your fan character and Sonic, but the “romance” is shown – as far as I can see – as being completely one sided, forced, uncomfortable and shallow. On Akai’s part, she doesn’t seem to return any affection by will and in my eyes that’s not love nor romance. And she seems in distress and uncomfortable with being a slave to Sonic’s love, which I can state, is not romance at all. Romance and love is being so attached to the person that you feel like you are heaven when in their presence. Wanting to keep them because of an obsession with their beauty is not love; that is pure lust. This brings me on to Sonic. In this picture, he is displayed as creepy and not the good, light hearted but cocky hedgehog that he is. He is pictured as someone who is shallow enough to ‘love’ someone regardless of their personality, and someone who disregards the feelings of the opposite party and forces his love onto her if or if not it is returned. Again, lust, not love. This is what makes me like this picture a little less.
Overall, it is aesthetically pleasing, but the context does downgrade the quality of the picture when you go beyond, “Oh, that looks pretty.” So, a good picture, I just don’t like the context.
Personally, I see romance as something that is give and take and is not forced on someone and is returned happily. The context the “romance” in this picture holds is not true romance in my opinion. I can understand that the intention of this picture was to show love between your fan character and Sonic, but the “romance” is shown – as far as I can see – as being completely one sided, forced, uncomfortable and shallow. On Akai’s part, she doesn’t seem to return any affection by will and in my eyes that’s not love nor romance. And she seems in distress and uncomfortable with being a slave to Sonic’s love, which I can state, is not romance at all. Romance and love is being so attached to the person that you feel like you are heaven when in their presence. Wanting to keep them because of an obsession with their beauty is not love; that is pure lust. This brings me on to Sonic. In this picture, he is displayed as creepy and not the good, light hearted but cocky hedgehog that he is. He is pictured as someone who is shallow enough to ‘love’ someone regardless of their personality, and someone who disregards the feelings of the opposite party and forces his love onto her if or if not it is returned. Again, lust, not love. This is what makes me like this picture a little less.
Overall, it is aesthetically pleasing, but the context does downgrade the quality of the picture when you go beyond, “Oh, that looks pretty.” So, a good picture, I just don’t like the context.
And yes, there is happiness, but I believe the happiness is not something that is moral. It is, in away, deriving happiness of trafficking of a person, owning a person as a treasure as you would own money or an object. This is treating your character as a mere object and saying that is something that should cause happiness and is okay is not morally right in my eyes. I know that you probably weren't intending for it to come across like this, but this is how it comes across. I feel like the image could, if drawn with different context, could be beautiful in both context and art style.
Yes, but may I ask you something, and say something? Was that meant to be a patronizing insult? And please, if someone finds the context of your drawing offensive, then please do not try to insult them or be patronizing. All that needs to be said is that you didn't find it offensive, and you're sorry if they found it offensive.
I just explaind to you in my critique and previous comment. To quote myself
"And yes, there is happiness, but I believe the happiness is not something that is moral. It is, in away, deriving happiness of trafficking of a person, owning a person as a treasure as you would own money or an object. This is treating your character as a mere object and saying that is something that should cause happiness and is okay is not morally right in my eyes. I know that you probably weren't intending for it to come across like this, but this is how it comes across. I feel like the image could, if drawn with different context, could be beautiful in both context and art style. "
"And yes, there is happiness, but I believe the happiness is not something that is moral. It is, in away, deriving happiness of trafficking of a person, owning a person as a treasure as you would own money or an object. This is treating your character as a mere object and saying that is something that should cause happiness and is okay is not morally right in my eyes. I know that you probably weren't intending for it to come across like this, but this is how it comes across. I feel like the image could, if drawn with different context, could be beautiful in both context and art style. "
Hold her as a treasure. Owning her. Maybe not forcing her to do anything yes but imprisoning and owning her. I wouldn't find that to be caring. He may very well care for her, yes, but this picture doesn't completely show that. Like if Akai's expression was changed and so was Sonic's and it was saying Akai was only his to protect then this picture would be okay with me. Another way to improve would to be in the first half, Akai seemed nervous but seemed calmer in the second. Knowing how good of an artist you are that could be a piece that blows me away.
Yes, protect, caring and hide away from the world. http://www.furaffinity.net/full/13743648/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14050701/
But to clean up that whole case, I like draw love between them both. It makes me full of happines. I like draw Sonic is teasing Akai, of course in posistive meaning. Maybe really it looks scary, but I wanted drew him cares about her.
But to clean up that whole case, I like draw love between them both. It makes me full of happines. I like draw Sonic is teasing Akai, of course in posistive meaning. Maybe really it looks scary, but I wanted drew him cares about her.
You're welcome. And I know from what happened on Deviantart. I like to say that I don't like things but I like to know whether it was the intention or just say that it probably wasn't the persons intention because that gives someone the time to explain. I'd only have been mean if you said something I considered vile.
I've made a few mistakes, and people still attacking me for that. Despite I apologized, there's coming rants on YT, hate arts on DA, gossiping, calling and make a fun. I found one person on DA uses my arts even with adult stuffs to make a fun on DA. I wrote many journals on DA, becasue I get many problems with them and I asked of help. I was break. I didn't know what to. And people calling still as drama. On YT still attacking me and my Akai, "slut, rape-fetish, mary-sue, hypocrite, protagonist". I really have enough.
I know. It may be because you haven't come forward and explained what you were thinking when making these mistakes. Lack of explaination and understanding makes ignorance. Now, I don't mean to offend you, but I do have some problems with your art. Your art is always has that little hit of sexuality, I found your pictures of rape art rather offensive and Akai's character needs to be improved and be more consistent. An also, when you made the picture of sondadow, saying that it sounds like Shadow is raping Sonic, I was offended. In a comment you said "Fangirls make homosexuality like couples with desire the sex." and this also offended me. I'm gay myself and this offended me, but all I want from you is to be let help you, and to be given some explanations for your mistakes.
Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't know.
Yes, I was very mad, but in reality I respect homosexualism. On DA are very exterme and weird yaoi pairing and maybe it made me mad. But I've learned respect other's works "they have the same right to draw like me". Sometimes I see yaoi couple, I take a deep breath and see that quote. I really trying. But I saw many offended me hate arts with spreaded lies, and I was very sad and break. I did explanation, huge explanation, but people said, "you don't have to explain yourself". But those action so much hurted me and I needed explain that. People just don't know the real reasons of my moves, but they think know everything about everyone. How come?
Yes, I was very mad, but in reality I respect homosexualism. On DA are very exterme and weird yaoi pairing and maybe it made me mad. But I've learned respect other's works "they have the same right to draw like me". Sometimes I see yaoi couple, I take a deep breath and see that quote. I really trying. But I saw many offended me hate arts with spreaded lies, and I was very sad and break. I did explanation, huge explanation, but people said, "you don't have to explain yourself". But those action so much hurted me and I needed explain that. People just don't know the real reasons of my moves, but they think know everything about everyone. How come?
It's fine, I've had a million times worse from people who meant it and did it on purpose.
I, personally, like yuri. It's not because I'm a fangirl, but I emphasize more with two girls in a relationship that two guys or a guy and a girl. But I can see why others don't like it or understand it. And I don't think it's right to do hate art; art relating to the current situation is fine, but hate art isn't good art in my eyes. And everyone will do that Akai. I'll do it, you'll do it. Everyone somewhere in their subconcious in really whiny, and bitchy and patronizing. But it's normal. It's human nature. Really, everyone is just terrible, it's just some terrible has some chocolate sauce on it. So we just decide to move on and just suck it up.
I, personally, like yuri. It's not because I'm a fangirl, but I emphasize more with two girls in a relationship that two guys or a guy and a girl. But I can see why others don't like it or understand it. And I don't think it's right to do hate art; art relating to the current situation is fine, but hate art isn't good art in my eyes. And everyone will do that Akai. I'll do it, you'll do it. Everyone somewhere in their subconcious in really whiny, and bitchy and patronizing. But it's normal. It's human nature. Really, everyone is just terrible, it's just some terrible has some chocolate sauce on it. So we just decide to move on and just suck it up.
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