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It is nicely drawn but, must her armor be so revealing? I know it's your character, and you choose what to draw but there are limits... You're making her seem very Mary Sue-ish, she hasn't much personality, most male characters she's involved with are only interested in her body, etc. Also that armor would be useless as it is so revealing, and her butt isn't even covered! You have talent yes, but have more respect for your characters.. You've probably heard it all before, but, a critique can really help with a person's characters, and can improve your skills! Even the greatest artist can become greater from the feedback of others
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