true indeed. I have also heard that applied to love, It never only works one way

I've put that saying to love as well at one time. It kind of sucks because you realize that everything's so messed up.

I was told a long time ago by a good friend,

"The one you love, and the one who loves you, are hardly ever, if not never, the same person"

That's a good saying, very sad though.

Strong repetitions of whole lines. Would a "what happened to you" fit before the second of the three ".... boy I knew" lines? The other two have that question attached. And maybe split it out into stanzas with those as the beginning of each?

Like, also, "at all/I'll always wonder" and "at all/you'll never know" are great repetitions. And then the "I'm done" and the "this game/...game called friendship,"

The word "things" is too ambiguous. The best antidote to dishonest people is to tell the truth.

As for the feeling: they're feelings probably a lot of people can connect with-- this may sound dumb but I've been taken advantage of by women who didn't even notice that I was a personality, once or twice. It's upsetting being accessorized, but what do you do?

It's a little unexpected to see you turn the game around and make it an outright competition. That may be the most poignant thing about the whole poem. It's fairly depressing.

little things:

takes two too -> takes two to

Cause your losing -> 'Cause you're losing

Ah well, thank you? I wrote this poem in about five minutes and my grammer/spelling isn't the best. >.<

This is a poignant poem. You are writing this from your heart, which gives it greater meaning and makes the lessons learned life stick ever more powerfully to those who listen.

Thanks Watcher you always know how to cheer me up! ^-^

I write poetry also. Why don't you come see?

Um sure why not?! ^-^