it is very good just wondering if you see my poetry.

Thanks for the complement, no I have not read your poetry but I will.

it is very good just wondering if you see my poetry.

It's rude to advertise your own stuff on other people's works, even if it is difficult to get comments.

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"Are" to "Our"

To be very honest, it doesn't seem like the poem really describes ecstacy or agony. All it seems to go out to say is that they are opposites. The only way to figure out the meaning of these words within the poem is to understand the definition of exultation and tribulation, two words even less used than agony and ecstacy.

It's also hard to say that we achieve destiny with those words, as "agony" is a feeling that comes from failure or difficulty, not achievement.

I don't know what you wanted to say with this poem, but it seems too general to say anything specific.

Thank you for your honesty it is appreciated.

thanx sorry it will not happen again.

sorry sometimes i get over the point i need to fix on what the poem means to this person.


and stop avertising my stuff to people there is enought pop-ups ads it is worst to do at a place
were there is no advertisements on this website.