"Damn Japan, you scary."

"Damn Japan, you sexy."

Well this is fun haha. It's a pretty simple sketch for you with pretty minimal coloring so there's not a lot I can say artistically because it's just something you were drawing for the story not really for the sake of creating a drawing. So it serves its purpose as an asset to your story really well but that's about it as a piece of artwork. I mean you did a good job drawing it but we both know a drawing like this is absolutely no trouble for you haha. It's good though, and your story is cute.