Decided that since this was a redo if a sketch I had sitting on my computer for hella long, Id do one of these things.

Things look a lot more aligned and have a lot more weight in the second one. pretty proud of it. When i picked this up It would be that much of an improvement but the little things speak volumes.

Also i made my own template because i think the original looks meh, so if any of you would like to use it it can be found here:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/puzvi6lro.....againblank.png