More Pie? Yes Please! (by voidflame)
by Shinespark
Writer
12 years ago
Jordan was having a normal day when he decided to take a walk. After strolling down the sidewalk for a while, he noticed a smell that was simply divine. It almost smelled like pumpkin pie, his favorite type of pie, but it smelled too good to be true.
Using his Luxray sense of smell, he followed the trail to a house that clearly was home to a caring grandmother. If the older car wasn't a tip-off, the distance away it was from town (far enough to go to dirt roads) and overall feel to the house assured it. Through the glass of a lit room Jordan could see a plump Vaporeon in a kitchen, busily yet calmly baking pies with two different ovens.
Temptation of trying the roots of the heavenly smell proved too much for him, Jordan knocked on the door. It took only a moment for Jordan to hear thumping and a few clicks of the door. The door swung open to reveal the Vaporeon with a mixing bowl.
"Hello sugar!" She said sweetly. "Smell the pies didja? Come on in, come on in!"
Nervously Jordan scratched the back of his head. "Thanks ma'am, but I already had dinner."
The Vaporeon sighed. "You ain't gettin' me to fall for that honey. You look starvin' anyway."
Jordan shrugged and entered the house. Immediately Jordan could smell various pies from apple to peach flavor, and he almost drooled. He was ushered into a somewhat spacious dining room, but instead of a dining table (which was shoved into a corner of the room) he was shown a beanbag chair. He sat down only to be nearl swallowed by it.
"The name's Raze sweetie. I'll go ahead and get the first batch." She went back into the kitchen and a moment later she returned- with a plate and a full pie. "Here honey, eat up!"
Jordan was in shock how large the pie was. The coloring said it was pumpkin pie, and there was a lack of slicing. "Th-thanks ma'am, but I couldn't possibly eat all this!"
Raze laughed. "Of course you can sugar. You're obviously starving to death, so eat up!" She hurriedly reentered the kitchen to continue her baking.
Glancing into the kitchen a moment, Jordan took a nervous bite of the pumpkin pie. Instantly he was blown away by the flavor and pure quality of the ingredients. Entranced by the deliciousness, Jordan wolfed down the entire pie by the time Raze returned.
Letting out a satisfied sigh, Jordan put the plate on his lap. "Thank you ma'am for the pie. It was the best thing I had ever tasted!"
Raze laughed. "Why thanks sweetie. Ah thought you'd love my cooking, so here's another pie!" She swapped my empty plate with another one full of apple pie.
Jordan's eyes widened. He was stuffed, and he also wasn't what you couldn't call a fan of apple pie. "Thank you Raze, but-"
"But nothing sugar! Ah know you'll like it."
She entered the kitchen again, leaving him to stare at the plate of pie on my lap. There was no way he could eat another. Yet, he didn't want to disappoint Raze or leave a full plate. Forcefully Jordan took a bite of the pie, ane thought he would have to choke it down- until the taste hit his tongue. Instantly he swallowed and within a couple of minutes the pie was gone.
Just as he was finishing off the plate Raze returned with another pie. Jordan licked his lips as the aroma hit his nose.
Raze smiled. "See honey, ah told you you were starving. Here's another pie to hold you off until the next batch."
As soon as the pie was handed to him he dug in. This one was peach flavor- a new favorite for him! Raze came in after he finished it, and then offered him another one. Addicted to her cooking, he couldn't help but say yes. It continued for over an hour, almost like a ritual. Raze gave the pie, the Luxray would eat it wholeheartedly.
"Uurp! Oh, excuse me!" Jordan smiled as he handed Raze the nth finished plate. "Thanks ma'am. Your cooking is the best!"
Raze smiled as she took the plate. "Now you wait right here, sweetie, and I'll be right back with a fresh batch."
Slightly disappointed but also excited to try another new pie flavor, Jordan let go of the plate and watched her walk away. However, he found himself feeling like he was made of lead. Looking down, Jordan was caught by surprise how heavy he had become. Just an hour ago he was one of the thinnest people in the world, and now he looked like he could easily weigh 400! Taken aback, the Luxray attenpted to get up only to have his balance thrown off. He fell back into the beanbag chair and felt his paws sink a good ways into his pudge.
Humming from the kitchen drew Jordan's attention away from his swollen self and back at the plump Vaporeon. "Ah just finished a whole batch of pumpkin pie! Ah'm sure you'll enjoy them."
"Th-thanks ma'am, but it's getting late. I should really get home." Jordan grew increasingly nervous, and every glance at the pie caused his stomach to groan from all of the pie he had alrealy eaten.
"That's a good point sugar. Why don't you just polish off these last pies?"
Jordan quickly grew conflicted. On one paw, he could leave and prevent the risk of further fattening pies. On the other... one bite couldn't hurt, would it?
"I guess a bite won't hurt..." Jordan said as he was given the pumpkin pie...A comment I made here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13779484/ became this. Drawn by
congruentPartisan, (also known as imperfectflame ) I used this pic for my icon. I have the utmost gratitude for Flame, and since it wasn't submitted on his page I thought I'd submit it on mine. Also, like the quick story I wrote for this? Be sure to let Flame know all about how much you liked it!
Again, since he doesn't have it on his page, I want you guys to favorite the heck out of this image for him. Usually I'd send you the link to his drawing, but I'ge already said twice now why I can't. This one's a keeper!
Also, I acknowledge any and all typos in this story. It was meant to be a quick write, so I may have made a few errors, either in grammar or storyline.
Colored version: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50640611/
Using his Luxray sense of smell, he followed the trail to a house that clearly was home to a caring grandmother. If the older car wasn't a tip-off, the distance away it was from town (far enough to go to dirt roads) and overall feel to the house assured it. Through the glass of a lit room Jordan could see a plump Vaporeon in a kitchen, busily yet calmly baking pies with two different ovens.
Temptation of trying the roots of the heavenly smell proved too much for him, Jordan knocked on the door. It took only a moment for Jordan to hear thumping and a few clicks of the door. The door swung open to reveal the Vaporeon with a mixing bowl.
"Hello sugar!" She said sweetly. "Smell the pies didja? Come on in, come on in!"
Nervously Jordan scratched the back of his head. "Thanks ma'am, but I already had dinner."
The Vaporeon sighed. "You ain't gettin' me to fall for that honey. You look starvin' anyway."
Jordan shrugged and entered the house. Immediately Jordan could smell various pies from apple to peach flavor, and he almost drooled. He was ushered into a somewhat spacious dining room, but instead of a dining table (which was shoved into a corner of the room) he was shown a beanbag chair. He sat down only to be nearl swallowed by it.
"The name's Raze sweetie. I'll go ahead and get the first batch." She went back into the kitchen and a moment later she returned- with a plate and a full pie. "Here honey, eat up!"
Jordan was in shock how large the pie was. The coloring said it was pumpkin pie, and there was a lack of slicing. "Th-thanks ma'am, but I couldn't possibly eat all this!"
Raze laughed. "Of course you can sugar. You're obviously starving to death, so eat up!" She hurriedly reentered the kitchen to continue her baking.
Glancing into the kitchen a moment, Jordan took a nervous bite of the pumpkin pie. Instantly he was blown away by the flavor and pure quality of the ingredients. Entranced by the deliciousness, Jordan wolfed down the entire pie by the time Raze returned.
Letting out a satisfied sigh, Jordan put the plate on his lap. "Thank you ma'am for the pie. It was the best thing I had ever tasted!"
Raze laughed. "Why thanks sweetie. Ah thought you'd love my cooking, so here's another pie!" She swapped my empty plate with another one full of apple pie.
Jordan's eyes widened. He was stuffed, and he also wasn't what you couldn't call a fan of apple pie. "Thank you Raze, but-"
"But nothing sugar! Ah know you'll like it."
She entered the kitchen again, leaving him to stare at the plate of pie on my lap. There was no way he could eat another. Yet, he didn't want to disappoint Raze or leave a full plate. Forcefully Jordan took a bite of the pie, ane thought he would have to choke it down- until the taste hit his tongue. Instantly he swallowed and within a couple of minutes the pie was gone.
Just as he was finishing off the plate Raze returned with another pie. Jordan licked his lips as the aroma hit his nose.
Raze smiled. "See honey, ah told you you were starving. Here's another pie to hold you off until the next batch."
As soon as the pie was handed to him he dug in. This one was peach flavor- a new favorite for him! Raze came in after he finished it, and then offered him another one. Addicted to her cooking, he couldn't help but say yes. It continued for over an hour, almost like a ritual. Raze gave the pie, the Luxray would eat it wholeheartedly.
"Uurp! Oh, excuse me!" Jordan smiled as he handed Raze the nth finished plate. "Thanks ma'am. Your cooking is the best!"
Raze smiled as she took the plate. "Now you wait right here, sweetie, and I'll be right back with a fresh batch."
Slightly disappointed but also excited to try another new pie flavor, Jordan let go of the plate and watched her walk away. However, he found himself feeling like he was made of lead. Looking down, Jordan was caught by surprise how heavy he had become. Just an hour ago he was one of the thinnest people in the world, and now he looked like he could easily weigh 400! Taken aback, the Luxray attenpted to get up only to have his balance thrown off. He fell back into the beanbag chair and felt his paws sink a good ways into his pudge.
Humming from the kitchen drew Jordan's attention away from his swollen self and back at the plump Vaporeon. "Ah just finished a whole batch of pumpkin pie! Ah'm sure you'll enjoy them."
"Th-thanks ma'am, but it's getting late. I should really get home." Jordan grew increasingly nervous, and every glance at the pie caused his stomach to groan from all of the pie he had alrealy eaten.
"That's a good point sugar. Why don't you just polish off these last pies?"
Jordan quickly grew conflicted. On one paw, he could leave and prevent the risk of further fattening pies. On the other... one bite couldn't hurt, would it?
"I guess a bite won't hurt..." Jordan said as he was given the pumpkin pie...A comment I made here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13779484/ became this. Drawn by
congruentPartisan, (also known as imperfectflame ) I used this pic for my icon. I have the utmost gratitude for Flame, and since it wasn't submitted on his page I thought I'd submit it on mine. Also, like the quick story I wrote for this? Be sure to let Flame know all about how much you liked it!Again, since he doesn't have it on his page, I want you guys to favorite the heck out of this image for him. Usually I'd send you the link to his drawing, but I'ge already said twice now why I can't. This one's a keeper!
Also, I acknowledge any and all typos in this story. It was meant to be a quick write, so I may have made a few errors, either in grammar or storyline.
Colored version: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50640611/
2014
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Dragonrace1
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Cute!
timeshild
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So adorable ^^
Shinespark
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OP
Thank you! ^^
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