Ugh wow a new submission. And an oekaki at that. :o

Did this at oekakicentral (which has an animation to it in case anyone is interested in seeing that), and its one of my first completed oekaki's in about a year now. So hopefully its decent. This is also new for me in trying to do decent backgrounds that actually have abit of a scene to them.

Feel free to critique this, just as usual redlining is much preferred and if its on my coloring please give me tips on how to make it better. Not just pointing out what its lacking. C:

And in micro goodness are onlookers  Dekar and  Ransom, with Neive in center in that lovely bikini (by popular demand, aka  Ritts). :C I kinda want one now though I could never wear it in public...

Anywho, enjoy!