"Oh. Shit..." I muttered under my breath, watching my Zangoose friend get dropped to the ground for the third time. The wild Seviper let out a hissing laugh, enjoying it's victory over it's age-old foe. The Zangoose held a paw to it's deep bites and cuts, feeling the blood begin to really well up and disgrace it's white fur.
Not that it was a shiny, and that red was an abnormality, but blood and fur just doesn't mix, you know? It seemed to cringe as it tried to push it's self back up. It was pushing it's self past it's limits, I knew, for me, to help me. I was stupid enough not to bring any of my other Pokémon because they deserved a day off... I watched on the sidelines with my legs slightly shaking in worry. It was shaking as it kept kneeling, trying to bring it's self back up, only to be pushed down by the snake's tail once again.
"Zaru...!" It called in apprehension, watching as the creature fell back down, putting pressure on another point. My breath seemed to lock in my throat as it went still, passing out. Blood spilled out on it's fur and into the grass, slowly, bit surely. I fumbled for my Pokéball and pressed the button as the Seviper began to crawl towards him, likely going to finish him off. Thankfully, I saw the red color disappear before it's tail could bury into the ground.
"Thank you for trying, Zaru..." I murmured, pressing the Pokéball onto the clutch on my backpack. I heard the Seviper grunt angrily, just inches away from finishing off it's prey. It pulled it's tail out, and glared at me, the second-best thing to any kind of prey. I quickly noticed it's gaze, about as strong as a sword's point.
"H-Hey there, b-buddy..." I whispered, slowly raising up my hands, showing how I wasn't any kind of a threat. Anymore, now. "N-... No hard feelings, right...?" Now, I know how I moved into it's territory and attacked it unprovoked, but... Everyone did that. I didn't actually think... Well, that was my problem. I didn't think.
I sighed, hearing another angry hiss from the Pokémon. Whatever was going to happen, I was going to deserve it. Good going me... The Seviper slithered towards me in a not-so graceful way, but eyed me in the way of caution. About eight feet full of snake and probably the last ten inches accommodated for it's fangs and the tail. The... brutal... sword-like, bloody red tail... I would be lucky if I got away without a scratch.
I began to notice the way of how it was moving around me in a circle. It didn't make me happy the way it started to slack up it's tail, and grow closer to me. I really didn't feel comfortable when it began to press against my legs. "H-Hey, I-I'm sorry about... The fight, can't we just... Start over...?" I questioned with a nervous chuckle. Just the way it eyed me on the second round quieted me down.
I could soon feel the scales brush against the outside of my pant legs, the edge of it's tail gently cutting into the fabric, thankfully not enough to fully puncture it. The Seviper eyed me warily, but seemed to grow more relaxed around me. Not in the way that made you want to pet the thing, though. The scales pushed in, making the fabric stick to my legs. Even if I tried to have some kind of clue to where this was going, I couldn't prepare myself for being tripped over by the sudden tug from slack.
"Ah, shit!" I cried as I was sent onto my back, much to the Seviper's joy. The tail quickly changed positions, beginning to wrap around my torso. I began to slightly fight back and wriggle out of it, but once again was quickly stopped, the dextrous tail pressing to my cheek. "... Okay... Okay, p-please..." I pleaded, raising my arms above the coils. Over the purple scales I could see the smug grin the Pokémon was facing.
"H-Hey, wait," I began to stammer, watching as the tail tip gently sawed at my backpack's strings without a care. I had little to argue for, but with my pack I just felt better. And now it was already unfit to be graced by both of my shoulders. I grew worried with a "reassuring" squeeze from my new snake friend, feeling the weight drop from my body.
"... Seviper, what are you going to do with me?" I tried to ask, but all I could get from him was a hiss, the tail pressing up against my neck now. I froze up even more and began to visibly shake. It seemed to just enjoy this. It's cold appendage graced my own warm skin for a strange reaction, but it slowly drew away. Breath seemed to flow seamlessly from my body and lungs as it curled tighter around me, seeming to be readying for something.
"W-Wait..." I stammered, thinking this was when it would simply end me. But it was quite far from that. I noted that the environment had a slight shilly air to it, and how I noticed in this time of panic was because it was reaching the parts of my skin that was covered by, oh, I don't know, my shirt. It was just cutting my shirt...? Right down the middle, yea, but why... I held my thoughts to myself, watching with wide eyes down at the snake, who seemed to watch me back with heavy interest. What would I do, say?
I truly didn't want to appeal to it's sense of curiosity, and wanted to just leave now. The one thing I could remember now was how my friends always said that I didn't think things through, and that it would catch up to me. Now it did... I noticed the final tug finally ripped my shirt apart, and the snake took no time in parting the flaps. It seemed to enjoy coiling more of it's tail and body around me, like an obsessive child with a teddy bear.
"Please... Seviper... I'm sorry, just... Let me go, please..." I pleaded again as it's head came a few inches short of touching mine. I flinched as it's forked tongue flicked out and lick my nose. "Okay..." I sighed, watching as it pulled it's head back to my lower body. What was it going to do next, rip off my pants? I desperately hoped not, and it thankfully wasn't the case. It moved down to my feet, and there wasn't much there besides sandals.
Which were, what else, just as easily ripped off. "Oh, come on..." I muttered silently, freezing up the next second. Something very wet pressed against my feet, a warmth encapsulating them up to my ankles. I wriggled, with the threat of getting squeezed again overcoming my fear, and sat up. My eyes grew wide.
The Seviper, once again with it's eyes waiting to meet mine, couldn't take my gaze fully away from it's mouth. Which currently had my feet in it's mouth. I gave out a weird little whimper, my fears having been confirmed. I felt sets of hot air breath brush at my soles, which made me wriggle some more. It was like it was laughing at me. "N-No, no, please..." I whispered, my voice wavering. The Seviper gently suckled on my feet, apparently getting a taste for me.
The air grew intensely cold as it opened it's mouth, beads of saliva connecting to the edges of where it snapped down on. I shivered for a moment, trying to pull away, but it quickly lurched forward, snapping up most of my lower legs. I let out a gasp involuntarily, feeling the back of it's mouth squish up against my heel and toes. This was happening. No. It just couldn't be. I tugged my feet, trying to get it free somehow, but that only seemed to elicit a laugh from the predator.
A wheeze escaped me and my lungs as I was squeezed out of breath, the struggle just coming right out of me. I shivered and shook, my face turning red for a few seconds before it finally let up. I took deep breaths, coughing out for a few seconds. "Seviper, please..." I cried, lifting my head again. It took advantage of my breathless part, and already had up to my knees in it's mouth, not even really paying attention to me now. I could just feel the color flush from my face. Experimentally, I moved my feet. I could feel softly moving muscles around, an incredibly warm place, and saliva coat my skin in some places.
I very nearly choked, feeling the snake gulp. It pulled my legs down an inch, I could feel the force behind such an action. All that gathering saliva seemed to make it flow so much smoother, and almost canceled out the heat, especially from the breath. "O-Oh g-god..." I stammered, feeling my hands start to shake with the nervous rush. The Seviper curled it's lips, enjoying the fear I was openly showing. Then it decided to make it even better.
I gasped, and quickly clamped my hands down on the snake's scales, feeling myself get lifted up. God, it was having it's fun with me. I squirmed, trying not to get pulled down, but the combination of gulps and gravity and pulls were making it very hard. The silently moving muscles contracting around my legs were very foreign and strange to me, and... Some strange thought in the back of my head even actually liked it...
It seemed forever to reach my waist, but after the lift it took only a few seconds. Then it was the matter of the coils. But, for now, already half of my body was in the Seviper. Actually... In it, in it's throat. I could feel it trying it's hardest to pull me further in, the soft yet forceful pushes down gave it evidence. My legs were already squished together, and seemed to be slowly baked with the combination of heat and saliva inside of it's hot body. I shivered, feeling more hot breaths hit my stomach and body.
"Oh, please, please, don't do this!" I cried again, feeling the coils slowly unravel, leaving me to gravity's grace as I was piled into the hungry maw. It's tongue idly licked my back, but what was really awaiting me was the building saliva. Each gulp reduced the amount in it's mouth, but it was quick to build back up by suckling on what parts it could. And now, that it had reached higher than my waist, the fangs were a real threat. Although it tried to keep it's self from puncturing me from such things, it sometimes truly couldn't help it's self.
About three inches up my abdomen, I felt the fangs touch my chest, and already I shivered, feeling the poison in them. Instantly and instinctively, I reached for the snakes head, trying to keep it from going any further. But it was so much faster than me, and I didn't get very far. My fingers graced the head scales just as it punctured my skin, poison injecting into my body.
"G-Ghk..." I flinched and froze up, feeling a pain like never before enter my body. You just can't explain pain, and the rest of the world seemed already to slowly fade away. It's poison was so powerful, I could feel my body begin to shut down. Even if it did let me go at this rate, I wouldn't make it to the next town in time to do anything, if I could even get out.
The Seviper huffed, and opened up it's jaws, which had grown redder with blood now. It continued it's quest to down me into it's body, slathering me up with saliva as I was pulled down. I groaned, unable to force myself to move, having a feverish heat reach me quite easily. The throat pulses continued to massage my sides and ease me towards it's midsection for digestion.
Without focusing on it, I hadn't realized that the Seviper was having no trouble in swallowing my body down whole, it's jaw back to it's normal place after unhinging it'self for my bigger parts. "S-... Seviper..." I pleaded out weakly once again, feeling the hot breaths of air brush past my chin and neck, which honestly made me shiver in some twisted way of pleasure. Like a tickle, if anything. It didn't show signs of stopping, but actually did seem to pause right there, allowing it's self to suckle away from the saliva and my skin, which must have been tantalizingly good at that point.
Slowly, the jaw opened up, and it showed me what was awaiting me. The darkness, rivulets of saliva, and the throat, which had enough of me in it at the time, but just seemed like it could go for more. I groaned, weakly wriggling about, although I could barely move anything, my whole body squished down inside of the snake's own restricting yet large body, the middle filled with a muscle-y center, slowly working away at me with massages, eagerly awaiting my arrival and willing me inside.
I could finally hear the swallows as I brushed past the fangs, shivering as my wounds were covered up with more saliva, making it feel even worse. It had a taste of blood now, if it hadn't before, that was for sure. "N-No..." I whimpered out, feeling my neck get encapsulated with some more of the heated, meaty parts, which helped me slide past it's throat. I gave up another small shiver, feeling my head begin to become squished by the same muscles that were pulling me down.
Yet, it actually truly stopped there, and I let out a frightened gasp as it's own mouth gently came on top of my head, pulling it into the darkness. My arms still stuck out of the Seviper, and it was the only part of me that felt the cold of the outside air. After being swabbed with it's heavy breath and warm saliva, I almost wanted to have more of it, but not like this. I could feel every small twitch and function of the snake, and hear it's bodily squelches and heartbeat as if it were in a separate room in a house. I slowly and gently wriggled in some way, only to feel the breaths mess up my hair in a faster fashion, seeming to enjoy it's self to these movements.
I stopped, and awaited my next destination, awaited the saliva to stop building up and to pull me down into the stomach. And slowly, that did come, the powerful gulps continuing to pull me down. I whined silently, gently reaching out for anything in the world outside to grab me and save me. But nothing came, the bottom of my face reaching the valve through to the rest of the Seviper's body. It seemed to struggle just a little bit after coming up through my neck, but rather easily climbed over my chin. Then, that was that. I felt the muscles climb over my face, the hot breaths and saliva fall away before returning back in the form of moving muscles and massaging innards.
I squirmed as I felt my arms slowly join me inside of the lengthy, large snake, my body making only a small bulge along it's body. It hissed in pleasure as it finally downed my fingers, enjoying the attempt I made to grab at it's maw and slow the descent. It felt myself slide down it's throat before slowly settling down at it's mid-section. The hot, moist air caught up to me quickly, as I ran out of air. The soft acids already stung, and made the worst impact at the poisoned and bit areas, making it so much worse for me. But I had already begun to pass out, and the pain was quick to fall away, my breaths catching in my throat, and silencing all of my moans and movements.
I'm sure I would become a rather nice accent to the enlarging snake's body, and I know it would enjoy feeling me inside it's body for a long while for the meantime that I slowly roasted and digested inside of it's body. A rather fitting meal for a snake after a battle. Not the best ending in the world...
----X----
So, this is my first ever story/vore-story on FA, and I've still got a long way to go to improve. I might have been a bit lazy, because this just sort of popped into my head at about midnight, and I had a rather... interest and urge to try and write this. So, get ready to probably see some poor writing, maybe some typos, although I tried to fix it up as much as possible. <:I
Oh, well. Please, do tell me what you think in the comments below, or tell me how I could improve in my writing. And do tell me if you have any sort of requests down at my userpage, I will be happy to oblige, and it's free! Thank you for reading!
Not that it was a shiny, and that red was an abnormality, but blood and fur just doesn't mix, you know? It seemed to cringe as it tried to push it's self back up. It was pushing it's self past it's limits, I knew, for me, to help me. I was stupid enough not to bring any of my other Pokémon because they deserved a day off... I watched on the sidelines with my legs slightly shaking in worry. It was shaking as it kept kneeling, trying to bring it's self back up, only to be pushed down by the snake's tail once again.
"Zaru...!" It called in apprehension, watching as the creature fell back down, putting pressure on another point. My breath seemed to lock in my throat as it went still, passing out. Blood spilled out on it's fur and into the grass, slowly, bit surely. I fumbled for my Pokéball and pressed the button as the Seviper began to crawl towards him, likely going to finish him off. Thankfully, I saw the red color disappear before it's tail could bury into the ground.
"Thank you for trying, Zaru..." I murmured, pressing the Pokéball onto the clutch on my backpack. I heard the Seviper grunt angrily, just inches away from finishing off it's prey. It pulled it's tail out, and glared at me, the second-best thing to any kind of prey. I quickly noticed it's gaze, about as strong as a sword's point.
"H-Hey there, b-buddy..." I whispered, slowly raising up my hands, showing how I wasn't any kind of a threat. Anymore, now. "N-... No hard feelings, right...?" Now, I know how I moved into it's territory and attacked it unprovoked, but... Everyone did that. I didn't actually think... Well, that was my problem. I didn't think.
I sighed, hearing another angry hiss from the Pokémon. Whatever was going to happen, I was going to deserve it. Good going me... The Seviper slithered towards me in a not-so graceful way, but eyed me in the way of caution. About eight feet full of snake and probably the last ten inches accommodated for it's fangs and the tail. The... brutal... sword-like, bloody red tail... I would be lucky if I got away without a scratch.
I began to notice the way of how it was moving around me in a circle. It didn't make me happy the way it started to slack up it's tail, and grow closer to me. I really didn't feel comfortable when it began to press against my legs. "H-Hey, I-I'm sorry about... The fight, can't we just... Start over...?" I questioned with a nervous chuckle. Just the way it eyed me on the second round quieted me down.
I could soon feel the scales brush against the outside of my pant legs, the edge of it's tail gently cutting into the fabric, thankfully not enough to fully puncture it. The Seviper eyed me warily, but seemed to grow more relaxed around me. Not in the way that made you want to pet the thing, though. The scales pushed in, making the fabric stick to my legs. Even if I tried to have some kind of clue to where this was going, I couldn't prepare myself for being tripped over by the sudden tug from slack.
"Ah, shit!" I cried as I was sent onto my back, much to the Seviper's joy. The tail quickly changed positions, beginning to wrap around my torso. I began to slightly fight back and wriggle out of it, but once again was quickly stopped, the dextrous tail pressing to my cheek. "... Okay... Okay, p-please..." I pleaded, raising my arms above the coils. Over the purple scales I could see the smug grin the Pokémon was facing.
"H-Hey, wait," I began to stammer, watching as the tail tip gently sawed at my backpack's strings without a care. I had little to argue for, but with my pack I just felt better. And now it was already unfit to be graced by both of my shoulders. I grew worried with a "reassuring" squeeze from my new snake friend, feeling the weight drop from my body.
"... Seviper, what are you going to do with me?" I tried to ask, but all I could get from him was a hiss, the tail pressing up against my neck now. I froze up even more and began to visibly shake. It seemed to just enjoy this. It's cold appendage graced my own warm skin for a strange reaction, but it slowly drew away. Breath seemed to flow seamlessly from my body and lungs as it curled tighter around me, seeming to be readying for something.
"W-Wait..." I stammered, thinking this was when it would simply end me. But it was quite far from that. I noted that the environment had a slight shilly air to it, and how I noticed in this time of panic was because it was reaching the parts of my skin that was covered by, oh, I don't know, my shirt. It was just cutting my shirt...? Right down the middle, yea, but why... I held my thoughts to myself, watching with wide eyes down at the snake, who seemed to watch me back with heavy interest. What would I do, say?
I truly didn't want to appeal to it's sense of curiosity, and wanted to just leave now. The one thing I could remember now was how my friends always said that I didn't think things through, and that it would catch up to me. Now it did... I noticed the final tug finally ripped my shirt apart, and the snake took no time in parting the flaps. It seemed to enjoy coiling more of it's tail and body around me, like an obsessive child with a teddy bear.
"Please... Seviper... I'm sorry, just... Let me go, please..." I pleaded again as it's head came a few inches short of touching mine. I flinched as it's forked tongue flicked out and lick my nose. "Okay..." I sighed, watching as it pulled it's head back to my lower body. What was it going to do next, rip off my pants? I desperately hoped not, and it thankfully wasn't the case. It moved down to my feet, and there wasn't much there besides sandals.
Which were, what else, just as easily ripped off. "Oh, come on..." I muttered silently, freezing up the next second. Something very wet pressed against my feet, a warmth encapsulating them up to my ankles. I wriggled, with the threat of getting squeezed again overcoming my fear, and sat up. My eyes grew wide.
The Seviper, once again with it's eyes waiting to meet mine, couldn't take my gaze fully away from it's mouth. Which currently had my feet in it's mouth. I gave out a weird little whimper, my fears having been confirmed. I felt sets of hot air breath brush at my soles, which made me wriggle some more. It was like it was laughing at me. "N-No, no, please..." I whispered, my voice wavering. The Seviper gently suckled on my feet, apparently getting a taste for me.
The air grew intensely cold as it opened it's mouth, beads of saliva connecting to the edges of where it snapped down on. I shivered for a moment, trying to pull away, but it quickly lurched forward, snapping up most of my lower legs. I let out a gasp involuntarily, feeling the back of it's mouth squish up against my heel and toes. This was happening. No. It just couldn't be. I tugged my feet, trying to get it free somehow, but that only seemed to elicit a laugh from the predator.
A wheeze escaped me and my lungs as I was squeezed out of breath, the struggle just coming right out of me. I shivered and shook, my face turning red for a few seconds before it finally let up. I took deep breaths, coughing out for a few seconds. "Seviper, please..." I cried, lifting my head again. It took advantage of my breathless part, and already had up to my knees in it's mouth, not even really paying attention to me now. I could just feel the color flush from my face. Experimentally, I moved my feet. I could feel softly moving muscles around, an incredibly warm place, and saliva coat my skin in some places.
I very nearly choked, feeling the snake gulp. It pulled my legs down an inch, I could feel the force behind such an action. All that gathering saliva seemed to make it flow so much smoother, and almost canceled out the heat, especially from the breath. "O-Oh g-god..." I stammered, feeling my hands start to shake with the nervous rush. The Seviper curled it's lips, enjoying the fear I was openly showing. Then it decided to make it even better.
I gasped, and quickly clamped my hands down on the snake's scales, feeling myself get lifted up. God, it was having it's fun with me. I squirmed, trying not to get pulled down, but the combination of gulps and gravity and pulls were making it very hard. The silently moving muscles contracting around my legs were very foreign and strange to me, and... Some strange thought in the back of my head even actually liked it...
It seemed forever to reach my waist, but after the lift it took only a few seconds. Then it was the matter of the coils. But, for now, already half of my body was in the Seviper. Actually... In it, in it's throat. I could feel it trying it's hardest to pull me further in, the soft yet forceful pushes down gave it evidence. My legs were already squished together, and seemed to be slowly baked with the combination of heat and saliva inside of it's hot body. I shivered, feeling more hot breaths hit my stomach and body.
"Oh, please, please, don't do this!" I cried again, feeling the coils slowly unravel, leaving me to gravity's grace as I was piled into the hungry maw. It's tongue idly licked my back, but what was really awaiting me was the building saliva. Each gulp reduced the amount in it's mouth, but it was quick to build back up by suckling on what parts it could. And now, that it had reached higher than my waist, the fangs were a real threat. Although it tried to keep it's self from puncturing me from such things, it sometimes truly couldn't help it's self.
About three inches up my abdomen, I felt the fangs touch my chest, and already I shivered, feeling the poison in them. Instantly and instinctively, I reached for the snakes head, trying to keep it from going any further. But it was so much faster than me, and I didn't get very far. My fingers graced the head scales just as it punctured my skin, poison injecting into my body.
"G-Ghk..." I flinched and froze up, feeling a pain like never before enter my body. You just can't explain pain, and the rest of the world seemed already to slowly fade away. It's poison was so powerful, I could feel my body begin to shut down. Even if it did let me go at this rate, I wouldn't make it to the next town in time to do anything, if I could even get out.
The Seviper huffed, and opened up it's jaws, which had grown redder with blood now. It continued it's quest to down me into it's body, slathering me up with saliva as I was pulled down. I groaned, unable to force myself to move, having a feverish heat reach me quite easily. The throat pulses continued to massage my sides and ease me towards it's midsection for digestion.
Without focusing on it, I hadn't realized that the Seviper was having no trouble in swallowing my body down whole, it's jaw back to it's normal place after unhinging it'self for my bigger parts. "S-... Seviper..." I pleaded out weakly once again, feeling the hot breaths of air brush past my chin and neck, which honestly made me shiver in some twisted way of pleasure. Like a tickle, if anything. It didn't show signs of stopping, but actually did seem to pause right there, allowing it's self to suckle away from the saliva and my skin, which must have been tantalizingly good at that point.
Slowly, the jaw opened up, and it showed me what was awaiting me. The darkness, rivulets of saliva, and the throat, which had enough of me in it at the time, but just seemed like it could go for more. I groaned, weakly wriggling about, although I could barely move anything, my whole body squished down inside of the snake's own restricting yet large body, the middle filled with a muscle-y center, slowly working away at me with massages, eagerly awaiting my arrival and willing me inside.
I could finally hear the swallows as I brushed past the fangs, shivering as my wounds were covered up with more saliva, making it feel even worse. It had a taste of blood now, if it hadn't before, that was for sure. "N-No..." I whimpered out, feeling my neck get encapsulated with some more of the heated, meaty parts, which helped me slide past it's throat. I gave up another small shiver, feeling my head begin to become squished by the same muscles that were pulling me down.
Yet, it actually truly stopped there, and I let out a frightened gasp as it's own mouth gently came on top of my head, pulling it into the darkness. My arms still stuck out of the Seviper, and it was the only part of me that felt the cold of the outside air. After being swabbed with it's heavy breath and warm saliva, I almost wanted to have more of it, but not like this. I could feel every small twitch and function of the snake, and hear it's bodily squelches and heartbeat as if it were in a separate room in a house. I slowly and gently wriggled in some way, only to feel the breaths mess up my hair in a faster fashion, seeming to enjoy it's self to these movements.
I stopped, and awaited my next destination, awaited the saliva to stop building up and to pull me down into the stomach. And slowly, that did come, the powerful gulps continuing to pull me down. I whined silently, gently reaching out for anything in the world outside to grab me and save me. But nothing came, the bottom of my face reaching the valve through to the rest of the Seviper's body. It seemed to struggle just a little bit after coming up through my neck, but rather easily climbed over my chin. Then, that was that. I felt the muscles climb over my face, the hot breaths and saliva fall away before returning back in the form of moving muscles and massaging innards.
I squirmed as I felt my arms slowly join me inside of the lengthy, large snake, my body making only a small bulge along it's body. It hissed in pleasure as it finally downed my fingers, enjoying the attempt I made to grab at it's maw and slow the descent. It felt myself slide down it's throat before slowly settling down at it's mid-section. The hot, moist air caught up to me quickly, as I ran out of air. The soft acids already stung, and made the worst impact at the poisoned and bit areas, making it so much worse for me. But I had already begun to pass out, and the pain was quick to fall away, my breaths catching in my throat, and silencing all of my moans and movements.
I'm sure I would become a rather nice accent to the enlarging snake's body, and I know it would enjoy feeling me inside it's body for a long while for the meantime that I slowly roasted and digested inside of it's body. A rather fitting meal for a snake after a battle. Not the best ending in the world...
----X----
So, this is my first ever story/vore-story on FA, and I've still got a long way to go to improve. I might have been a bit lazy, because this just sort of popped into my head at about midnight, and I had a rather... interest and urge to try and write this. So, get ready to probably see some poor writing, maybe some typos, although I tried to fix it up as much as possible. <:I
Oh, well. Please, do tell me what you think in the comments below, or tell me how I could improve in my writing. And do tell me if you have any sort of requests down at my userpage, I will be happy to oblige, and it's free! Thank you for reading!
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Hey, thanks a lot for giving me that comment! It really helps to show that people would like more.
I will definitely think of some more stories! It's actually an interesting concept that I think people need to work on some more. The usual stories I read are all of them just being accepting of such a fate, but to be honest, I find this alternative much more... entertaining. Thank you again. :)
I will definitely think of some more stories! It's actually an interesting concept that I think people need to work on some more. The usual stories I read are all of them just being accepting of such a fate, but to be honest, I find this alternative much more... entertaining. Thank you again. :)
You're welcome. ;)
I try to be someone who comments and gives constructive feedback on everything I read, although sadly most times I fail at that; having nothing to say in mind... I did like this a lot though, and as it was your first story, I made an effort. XD
Man-eating pokemon are awesome in my opinion, and the topic seems unfortunately rare in vore-literature...
~Will be reading your latest when I have time. ^^
I try to be someone who comments and gives constructive feedback on everything I read, although sadly most times I fail at that; having nothing to say in mind... I did like this a lot though, and as it was your first story, I made an effort. XD
Man-eating pokemon are awesome in my opinion, and the topic seems unfortunately rare in vore-literature...
~Will be reading your latest when I have time. ^^
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