Spitfire is at the top of her game ,the best of the best. Someponys would say she has everything.But how wrong they are.
Dealing with her heart being broken by her ex,while only her Wonderbolts teammates by her side to cheer her up.While they deal with air shows and the ass of upper class pony's.
But once again her life will change when a creature enters her world with a flying beast that shears her name.
This story at the moment is being beta by myself since I don't want to force 3 story's on to Thardoc who is beta my other 2 story's.
So im looking for anypony to beta this story for me please ^.^
This is set after season 3
Main Paring SpitfirexOC
Chapter 3 Talking Pony’s with magic,WTF
“ BEEEP BEEEP BEEP.”
“Uhhhh!”
“Shhh quite get the Princess,the thing is waking up. I will keep the bonds on it.” Said a unknown male voice.
“Right.” Said the other voice,as the sound of clops exit the room.
“Huu what going on?” Said the thing,that the 2 unknowns spoke about.
“It Speak Equis.?”Said the unknown voice ,in a shocked tone .
“ What are you talking about? We are speaking English, not Equis? Uh why is their a horse in here?.” Asked the thing in a confused tone.
“Horse! ,im a Pony and that a Unicorn creature.” Said the Unicorn,while he glared at the creature.
Their was silence before the creature started to freak out. As turn his head with quick movements,before seeing his human refection. He saw his body was wrap in bandages ,as well as being attached to a machine. He guessed it was a heart machine,since it was giving of beeps. But his eyes turn to see the horse refection,that was wearing Armour. An their was a horn coming out of his head,which once again sent him off into the deep end.
“You spoke but that impossible! and Unicorns don’t exist. You are myths,that right myths. Maybe my plane crashed and im in heaven or hell. Or maybe I am dreaming and if I pinch myself. I will wake up, here we go. OUCH,WAIT IM NOT DREAMING NO NO !NO !!.” He said in a crazy mumbling tone.
When the lone Unicorn guard look on with a worried look. Holding a spear in his magic grasp,ready to defend himself or the hospital staff. The guard then herd the noise of hoof steps, before a midnight blue glow turn the door handle. To open the door to revive a certain Princess of the Night,with 4 of her Thestrals behind her.
Only for Stuart eyes to twitch seeing the new arrivals ,as he mumble even more crazy stuff. While the Thestrals look at their Queen,waiting for a order from the Princess of Dreams. Luna was taken by surprised by the unknown creature,from the reports she had been sent by Twilight. She had put in her report that a fur less Minotaur had crashed some big metal monster into Ponyvile.
But what was in front of her was a creature, that she had never seen before. An being a creature that controlled the moon and had lived for a very very long time. Had seen all kind of creatures,but nothing like this injured one. That was acting crazy,in the bed that was in front of her.
Could this mean he was a Alien?, a creature not from Equss . This was so exciting and terrifying,why had this creature come to their home?. Friendship?, genocide? or maybe to kidnap her or her Pony’s for their own goods.
An Luna swear to her mother name ,that this Alien would regret even thinking of harming her little pony’s. Since this creature would fill the full rage and power of the Princess of the night. But that if the creature was to do something bad to her Pony’s. But it look like it was having a nervous breakdown.
“Thou creature,we wish to understand what thou are,an why thou have come to Equss.” Luna said to Stuart,not using her Royal Canterlot voice.
Since she guess it would sent him off even more,an they would get no were.
“ What no you not real ,just my mind messing with me. Pony’s cant talk or have wings or horns or have spooking hair and tails. That right I must be dreaming after long day of drinking, yeah that right.” Stuart said mostly to himself,as he kept on looking around with a crazed look.
One of the Thestrals guards let out a hiss,while baring his fangs at the human.
“ Thou dare dishonour our Queen,thou hairless Minotaur.” One of the Luna guards said to Stuart, in a angry tone.
“This is enough Captain Leo Starlight,our guest is not in the state of mind.” Luna reapplied to her captain, as she walk over to Stuart.
Who push himself further way from the night princess till he hit the backboard of the bed. While looking at Luna with fear.
“No leave me alone ,your not real. “ Stuart shouted in fear.
Luna said nothing as her horn light up to it night blue,as she preformed a spell. While she open her mouth ,showing of her own fangs. As she cast her spell over Sin, who fell into a peaceful sleep. She then turn around to speak to her guards.
“ The creature isn’t to be disturbed until I return. I must speak to my Sister about these interesting matters.” Luna said to her guards.
As they all bow the heads to their Queen,as she turn to walk way.
“ Of course Queen Luna.” Leo said to his Queen,as did the other Luna guards.
Causing her to blush on how her guards ,class her above her sister. But she was happy to be equals to her sister.
2 hours later
“ Uh well that was one crazy dream.” Stuart said to him self,as he then open his eyes to gasp and jump in shock. Seeing the large blue horse thing again.
“ Aww thou has awaken.” Luna said to Stuart,
While looking at the creature ,Stuart saw next to it. A larger white thing,that look at him with cold eyes. Sending chills down the young pilot spine.
“ Im not in Eastleigh any more. “Stuart said to himself.
End of chapter 3
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Dealing with her heart being broken by her ex,while only her Wonderbolts teammates by her side to cheer her up.While they deal with air shows and the ass of upper class pony's.
But once again her life will change when a creature enters her world with a flying beast that shears her name.
This story at the moment is being beta by myself since I don't want to force 3 story's on to Thardoc who is beta my other 2 story's.
So im looking for anypony to beta this story for me please ^.^
This is set after season 3
Main Paring SpitfirexOC
Chapter 3 Talking Pony’s with magic,WTF
“ BEEEP BEEEP BEEP.”
“Uhhhh!”
“Shhh quite get the Princess,the thing is waking up. I will keep the bonds on it.” Said a unknown male voice.
“Right.” Said the other voice,as the sound of clops exit the room.
“Huu what going on?” Said the thing,that the 2 unknowns spoke about.
“It Speak Equis.?”Said the unknown voice ,in a shocked tone .
“ What are you talking about? We are speaking English, not Equis? Uh why is their a horse in here?.” Asked the thing in a confused tone.
“Horse! ,im a Pony and that a Unicorn creature.” Said the Unicorn,while he glared at the creature.
Their was silence before the creature started to freak out. As turn his head with quick movements,before seeing his human refection. He saw his body was wrap in bandages ,as well as being attached to a machine. He guessed it was a heart machine,since it was giving of beeps. But his eyes turn to see the horse refection,that was wearing Armour. An their was a horn coming out of his head,which once again sent him off into the deep end.
“You spoke but that impossible! and Unicorns don’t exist. You are myths,that right myths. Maybe my plane crashed and im in heaven or hell. Or maybe I am dreaming and if I pinch myself. I will wake up, here we go. OUCH,WAIT IM NOT DREAMING NO NO !NO !!.” He said in a crazy mumbling tone.
When the lone Unicorn guard look on with a worried look. Holding a spear in his magic grasp,ready to defend himself or the hospital staff. The guard then herd the noise of hoof steps, before a midnight blue glow turn the door handle. To open the door to revive a certain Princess of the Night,with 4 of her Thestrals behind her.
Only for Stuart eyes to twitch seeing the new arrivals ,as he mumble even more crazy stuff. While the Thestrals look at their Queen,waiting for a order from the Princess of Dreams. Luna was taken by surprised by the unknown creature,from the reports she had been sent by Twilight. She had put in her report that a fur less Minotaur had crashed some big metal monster into Ponyvile.
But what was in front of her was a creature, that she had never seen before. An being a creature that controlled the moon and had lived for a very very long time. Had seen all kind of creatures,but nothing like this injured one. That was acting crazy,in the bed that was in front of her.
Could this mean he was a Alien?, a creature not from Equss . This was so exciting and terrifying,why had this creature come to their home?. Friendship?, genocide? or maybe to kidnap her or her Pony’s for their own goods.
An Luna swear to her mother name ,that this Alien would regret even thinking of harming her little pony’s. Since this creature would fill the full rage and power of the Princess of the night. But that if the creature was to do something bad to her Pony’s. But it look like it was having a nervous breakdown.
“Thou creature,we wish to understand what thou are,an why thou have come to Equss.” Luna said to Stuart,not using her Royal Canterlot voice.
Since she guess it would sent him off even more,an they would get no were.
“ What no you not real ,just my mind messing with me. Pony’s cant talk or have wings or horns or have spooking hair and tails. That right I must be dreaming after long day of drinking, yeah that right.” Stuart said mostly to himself,as he kept on looking around with a crazed look.
One of the Thestrals guards let out a hiss,while baring his fangs at the human.
“ Thou dare dishonour our Queen,thou hairless Minotaur.” One of the Luna guards said to Stuart, in a angry tone.
“This is enough Captain Leo Starlight,our guest is not in the state of mind.” Luna reapplied to her captain, as she walk over to Stuart.
Who push himself further way from the night princess till he hit the backboard of the bed. While looking at Luna with fear.
“No leave me alone ,your not real. “ Stuart shouted in fear.
Luna said nothing as her horn light up to it night blue,as she preformed a spell. While she open her mouth ,showing of her own fangs. As she cast her spell over Sin, who fell into a peaceful sleep. She then turn around to speak to her guards.
“ The creature isn’t to be disturbed until I return. I must speak to my Sister about these interesting matters.” Luna said to her guards.
As they all bow the heads to their Queen,as she turn to walk way.
“ Of course Queen Luna.” Leo said to his Queen,as did the other Luna guards.
Causing her to blush on how her guards ,class her above her sister. But she was happy to be equals to her sister.
2 hours later
“ Uh well that was one crazy dream.” Stuart said to him self,as he then open his eyes to gasp and jump in shock. Seeing the large blue horse thing again.
“ Aww thou has awaken.” Luna said to Stuart,
While looking at the creature ,Stuart saw next to it. A larger white thing,that look at him with cold eyes. Sending chills down the young pilot spine.
“ Im not in Eastleigh any more. “Stuart said to himself.
End of chapter 3
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