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A bonus cut, which i covered her in bikini so i can show it to everyone as
general ratings.
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" So, what brings you to here? I'm up for some fun if you want ... "
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A bonus cut, which i covered her in bikini so i can show it to everyone as
general ratings.
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Jacky Me!Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Wolf
Size 1280 x 1280px
File Size 675.4 kB
gave this personal critique to a person who posted this piece on Facebook, and I personally wanted to give my input on it on your gallery for reference if you needed it. :3
::WARNING HONEST CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM MODE ACTIVE::
1) The Head Shape;
Yes it's in proper form, but the chin protrudes too far out, almost giving the female character an under bite.
2) The Muzzle
The muzzle angle seems to go way too low for where the head is positioned and directed.
3) The neck;
Its fluffiness is right on, but it seems too long and too wide for the head its attached to.
4) The lower torso;
At the chest it shouldn't be as big as it is unless the character is meant to be overweight, but looking at the arms, she's not, so it should be slimmed down.
all in all from a scale of 1 to 10 this piece is a 6.5 in my book. But looking through your gallery since I have to say that the quality of some places I've discussed have been improved a good deal.
::WARNING HONEST CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM MODE ACTIVE::
1) The Head Shape;
Yes it's in proper form, but the chin protrudes too far out, almost giving the female character an under bite.
2) The Muzzle
The muzzle angle seems to go way too low for where the head is positioned and directed.
3) The neck;
Its fluffiness is right on, but it seems too long and too wide for the head its attached to.
4) The lower torso;
At the chest it shouldn't be as big as it is unless the character is meant to be overweight, but looking at the arms, she's not, so it should be slimmed down.
all in all from a scale of 1 to 10 this piece is a 6.5 in my book. But looking through your gallery since I have to say that the quality of some places I've discussed have been improved a good deal.
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