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Something that came out of free writing a while back and I decided to finish it up. Experience interacting with a massive vixen through the eyes of a tiny human. Hope you all like it. ^^
EDIT: If the file you downloaded isn't titled The Vixen, it's the unfinished version I uploaded by mistake. F5 and try again if that's the case. I'm so sorry for the mix up. >.<
EDIT: If the file you downloaded isn't titled The Vixen, it's the unfinished version I uploaded by mistake. F5 and try again if that's the case. I'm so sorry for the mix up. >.<
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 47.5 kB
Quite the adorable story.
I admit, it kinda felt like it was written as someone's personal fantasy story(since it's basically about a micro human and macro vixen meeting each other, and both of them just being friendly towards each other and cuddling a little), but it was still well-written and charming to read. Especially since you did a great job on the micro's perspective, most of all by taking into account what you mentioned about the micro having a limited perception of the rest of the world (which seems to be implied to be due to more or less having lived his whole life in that room the story started out in, nice take on that). The fact that they didn't know each other's language and had to use body language was another aspect I found impressive with the writing of this.
One thing I want to bring up though, is that the only reason I knew the micro is a human is because the keywords mentioned it, since in the story itself there was no mention or reference to (as far as I can remember at least) the micro guy's species or race. The only distinguishing feature mentioned is that he has smooth skin, but that doesn't exactly narrow it down.
I admit, it kinda felt like it was written as someone's personal fantasy story(since it's basically about a micro human and macro vixen meeting each other, and both of them just being friendly towards each other and cuddling a little), but it was still well-written and charming to read. Especially since you did a great job on the micro's perspective, most of all by taking into account what you mentioned about the micro having a limited perception of the rest of the world (which seems to be implied to be due to more or less having lived his whole life in that room the story started out in, nice take on that). The fact that they didn't know each other's language and had to use body language was another aspect I found impressive with the writing of this.
One thing I want to bring up though, is that the only reason I knew the micro is a human is because the keywords mentioned it, since in the story itself there was no mention or reference to (as far as I can remember at least) the micro guy's species or race. The only distinguishing feature mentioned is that he has smooth skin, but that doesn't exactly narrow it down.
*Smiles* An absolute joy to read, as always. You really do have a wonderful nack for bringing the very best of macro/micro play, to life. There's just something magical about first contact scenarios. Even more so with neat twists, like the two of them not being able to speak the same language. Which makes sense when you think about it. :)
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