OK, this is the first chapter of my first story, for real this time.
The protagonist is the character "Dustin" from those character bios I posted forever ago. It's...sort of a superhero story, but not exactly. Ah, trying to classify it is too hard. Let's just say it's an action/adventure and call it a day. =v

Anyway, for those who bother to read this, a comment would be much appreciated, short or otherwise!