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Re-hash of something I posted earlier.
Yea just more ideas. Please critique on this, other then the low recording quality (cuz I know.. I think it has a close knit vibe like just fucking around to show my bros..) I really like how it flows. Almost seems to long before I get into the main part of the song, like coming into the verse(like a bit after the 2 minute mark) and chorus(which is right after, followed by a open off beat palm muted bridge dealie). Just because this song could be over 10 minutes easy and I'm not sure I want that for this particular song. Maybe I'm going riff crazy and can't let go.
Still rough and I'll likely tighten up and do less repetitions to keep a good pace but yea, I would like some outsider input for my own perspective. <3
Yea just more ideas. Please critique on this, other then the low recording quality (cuz I know.. I think it has a close knit vibe like just fucking around to show my bros..) I really like how it flows. Almost seems to long before I get into the main part of the song, like coming into the verse(like a bit after the 2 minute mark) and chorus(which is right after, followed by a open off beat palm muted bridge dealie). Just because this song could be over 10 minutes easy and I'm not sure I want that for this particular song. Maybe I'm going riff crazy and can't let go.
Still rough and I'll likely tighten up and do less repetitions to keep a good pace but yea, I would like some outsider input for my own perspective. <3
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File Size 3.63 MB
Well dude..other than what you said with tightening up your playing and geting your timing squared up...it sounded pretty damn good...that opening does need a bit of work though...i can't quite put my finger on it...
Almost sounds like its rushed....try slowing it down just a cunt hair and i bet it will fix that problem.
Good go at it mate...this could be a rockin ass riff with just a bit of fine tuning.
Almost sounds like its rushed....try slowing it down just a cunt hair and i bet it will fix that problem.
Good go at it mate...this could be a rockin ass riff with just a bit of fine tuning.
Fuck, I love the intro. D: Yay for post-punk-iness.
I remember the riff after that!
Pretty tight shit from around 1:20 to 2:40.
What I think is the chorus part is really cool.
God, I love the playing with space/rhythm or whatever in the near-end bit. D: <3
So, yeah, if nothing else, use the beginning and end for things. They rock. D: <3
(But maybe you shouldn't listen to a no-wave, baroque-pop type guy for a metal thing. XP)
Sorry if I sounded entirely dumb or anything.
I remember the riff after that!
Pretty tight shit from around 1:20 to 2:40.
What I think is the chorus part is really cool.
God, I love the playing with space/rhythm or whatever in the near-end bit. D: <3
So, yeah, if nothing else, use the beginning and end for things. They rock. D: <3
(But maybe you shouldn't listen to a no-wave, baroque-pop type guy for a metal thing. XP)
Sorry if I sounded entirely dumb or anything.
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