the moo spell a very powerful one

that's some powerful magic..! o.o

I'm guessing that's 'meinem', and not 'memem' (which is how the word looks).

Translation: My soul, separate yourself from my body. Even without that, the gist of it was obvious.

I see it coming... quite not a nice end this particular Rodent would have. *chuckles*
i clike those last three panels hehehe ^^

Um are you sure that's a spell book or a coloring book?

The coloring is absolutely incredible. What do you use to line/color your work? I might have to look into getting some.

Female Jerb wants to learn Dream Eater!

Well I think we all know what is going to result, but this should be a nice comic to keep an eye on!
Also, Moo

Ooooooo I like how this starting :3 <3

Can totally see soul noms ensuing from this xD After all not much you can do after your soul is released and someone just happens to suck it up xD

*squeaks and smiles* Awesome first page.

I love the look and expressions you have for Rodent, beautifully capturing his thoughts and excitement, and of course, drawing Aqua's attention is always a good idea. ;)

That spell book is adorable. How could a rat not want to read and try out one or two of those spells inside? :D

Thanks again so much for taking on this commission. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how the next page plays out. <3

Cute cow spotted! Moo! <3

soooo much detail, cool.