My first try at a FA submission. Don't hold back on the criticisms!
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Category Story / Transformation
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 30 kB
This was well written. I like the little internal struggle and the sensations he felt before losing consciousness. He did seem to come to grips with things very quickly when he awoke. I think most people would freak a bit more. Perhaps, that is explained in a later chapter.
Good work.
Good work.
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