Your wordless storytelling is very good here, and in the earlier pages. I'm curious to see where this is going...

I love your architecture.

When designing the look and "Feel" for the comic, I tried to "Think like a mouse-person" in order to figure out how to draw their houses and such. I figured the cartoon "Mouse Hole" might be a good theme to reflect on, and thus I chose "Dome" style homes and structures. In the "Meeting Hall," I thought a "Church Like" setting would be appropreate as the ceremonies held within were usually spiritualistic in nature. The multiple, rectangular windows and forms were intended to contrast ssharply with the building's rounded forms, and in a way represent the frames of the comic, or if anything, "Snapshots" of the lives of the mouse people attending the ceremonies.

Very fine thinking and feeling; excellent success!

very very good work! i still never try to draw a lot of people in the same draw....

Looks somewhere between a meeting of the Natioal Socialist Funny Animal Party and a gospel service.