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Looks like he is starting to pack on a few pounds XD
Im still not very good at TF sequences but let me know what ya think of this page everyone owo
anyway enjoy~
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Shibo no Kizuna ©
PLEASE READ RIGHT TO LEFT
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Looks like he is starting to pack on a few pounds XD
Im still not very good at TF sequences but let me know what ya think of this page everyone owo
anyway enjoy~
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Shibo no Kizuna ©
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Pokemon
Size 826 x 1280px
File Size 1020 kB
While I really like the focus on the ear and hands changing, I feel like you could have detailed more of the weight gain, since I assume that is a major part of the series? Perhaps you could have split the TF and the weight gain into two or more pages, as I feel going from overweight to obese and only having the belly as the centre point of the weight gain underplays it.
I really like how the arms of his jacket tear and the buckle around his wrist comes off and how you show it coming off in the middle panel.
I really like how the arms of his jacket tear and the buckle around his wrist comes off and how you show it coming off in the middle panel.
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