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Commission story for 
Ian McGecko wherein doing the right thing makes you beeg!
If only.
Anyways, hope you all enjoy! Let me know what you think!
Brock, Story © C'est moi
Ian © Ian McGecko
Ian McGecko wherein doing the right thing makes you beeg!If only.
Anyways, hope you all enjoy! Let me know what you think!
Brock, Story © C'est moi
Ian ©
Ian McGecko
Category Story / Muscle
Species Gecko
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 23.7 kB
Listed in Folders
Well I think I understand the intention behind all this, but I just don't personally feel as sparked about it as you wanted. I think its because the conflict seems a little too unrealistic. I mean I know what bullies do, and they don't just go into your face like that. They'd get in trouble on the spot if they ever tried a direct approach.
You have a great idea, though. I just personally feel you could use some training in execution.
As long as you truly wrote what you wanted to, it doesn't really matter, though ;)!
You have a great idea, though. I just personally feel you could use some training in execution.
As long as you truly wrote what you wanted to, it doesn't really matter, though ;)!
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