I won't give up
If I did I would
Not be the person I am today
Not be fighting for what I believe in
Not have found friends who I can trust
Not be here...
So yeah... You shouldn't give up even when everything looks bad. Haha yeah.... Cliche and corny X3
Okay! So here is another picture! Yeah, it's a bit more fancy than usual, but it's still no good. No good background. Shading is horrible. Text is ugly. The overall concept is just plain bad. Give me Critics! Now! I need to learn.
A little background on the picture. Sort of based on a comic I had wanted to make, but it never went off. Yeah... My partner sacrificed her life for me and all I'm left with is her head band. Haha It wouldn't have made a good comic anyways X3
Enjoy or not!
If I did I would
Not be the person I am today
Not be fighting for what I believe in
Not have found friends who I can trust
Not be here...
So yeah... You shouldn't give up even when everything looks bad. Haha yeah.... Cliche and corny X3
Okay! So here is another picture! Yeah, it's a bit more fancy than usual, but it's still no good. No good background. Shading is horrible. Text is ugly. The overall concept is just plain bad. Give me Critics! Now! I need to learn.
A little background on the picture. Sort of based on a comic I had wanted to make, but it never went off. Yeah... My partner sacrificed her life for me and all I'm left with is her head band. Haha It wouldn't have made a good comic anyways X3
Enjoy or not!
Category All / General Furry Art
Species Wolf
Size 770 x 1009px
File Size 231.5 kB
no, it would make a great comic, the message may be corny and cheesy but powerful none the less. i do like the swordfighter image of your character. ^_^ it a rarity to see your character wit such a deep a expression, even if he lost something improant, he keeps fighting without fail. maybe just the background would need work, otherwise your character is just perfect.
Don't give up? I like that, ... But aren't you kinda contradicting yourself?
You say you shouldn't give up, but you also shouldn't give up on things as simple as a picture! If you just keep at the picture, you'll figure something man! Seriously, the only time I feel REALLY confident in one of my pictures, is if the sketch itself takes like an hour or two. The longer ya take, the better it comes out ^-^!
You say you shouldn't give up, but you also shouldn't give up on things as simple as a picture! If you just keep at the picture, you'll figure something man! Seriously, the only time I feel REALLY confident in one of my pictures, is if the sketch itself takes like an hour or two. The longer ya take, the better it comes out ^-^!
hehe, i think u did pretty awsome, and i like your style anyways =3
but if u just want some personal likes thrown at ya, here is a few:
on the BG, it looks fine, but where your standing, u coulda went ahead and made it into a ground, so it would not look like everything is floating...
also, your head seems smaller than usual, but it still has a good general shape, except mebbe your muzzle should not be so flat (it seems more of like a snub-nose dog in this view)
but dats all i can think of =3
the rest looks kool >wO
but if u just want some personal likes thrown at ya, here is a few:
on the BG, it looks fine, but where your standing, u coulda went ahead and made it into a ground, so it would not look like everything is floating...
also, your head seems smaller than usual, but it still has a good general shape, except mebbe your muzzle should not be so flat (it seems more of like a snub-nose dog in this view)
but dats all i can think of =3
the rest looks kool >wO
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