I like this so far

Hey, thanks! I put a bit of effort into this story. I'm glad someone likes it. (:

Thank you so much Firr! this is awesomeness beyond compare. Thankyouthankyourthankyouthankyou!
*chases tail around in circle*

Oh, don't worry. There's more where that came from. I'm so sorry it took so long to get to you. It's actually been done for a couple of weeks now, but I couldn't upload it.

Well, I'm glad you like it. It was fun to write. (:

It's wonderful I love how you played with fox instincts and how everything would look and feel to be something totally different than a huamn. It's wonderful. I really can't believe that you are planning on doing a whole week of these. That is so awesome.

Thanks. I tired to focus on the effects of the transformation, rather than the TF itself. I mean, how many ways can you discribe a hand changing into a paw? I think I did pretty well in that aspect, though.

Also, I know I said a week, but I won't be pumping out one a day like you did. I'm a bit busy at the moment, and if I tried, I think my muse would kill me in my sleep. ):

No no no, pumping out a piece of drawing artwork a day isn't the same thing as writing a story. It is super awesome for you to do this, take as long as you want.

This is goin to be fun.

Oh yes, yes it is. Glad you liked the story! (:

Excellent fox story! TF description, post-TF life and thrilling experience.
And it contain NO sex NOR TG! Wonderful! Please, continue it clear.

+ 2 minor fix - foxes have 4 fingers on their hindpaws, not 3. They lack thumb, but have other fingers. Maybe, Jill looked too much cartoons.

+ “Y’know, I’ve never seen an actual fox around here, and trust me, I’ve been here a lot.
+ She smelled beautiful. I hadn’t ever seen a fox up close before, and I’d never think I’d see one like this.

I believe a 300 year witch could not be wrong. But he meet foxes. Contradiction.

I agree with the 3/4 toes thing, but it's not going to keep me up at night. Foxes have the four lower digits on their hind paws, but interestingly enough, they have all five digits on thier front paws (the 'thumb' being too high be seen on a fox track)

But as for the other foxes in the area thing.
Well, I did run off to a different part of the woods so that might explain the contradiction. She never saw foxes around that part of the woods, but she might not have been over to the other part that I was in that often. Also, foxes are good at running away from people and hiding.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the critique as well.

As for the two errors:
Well, I think Firr has seen too many cartoons. I didn't really research the fox to figure out some of the details, like the toes. Whoops! Thanks for catching that.

Also, as for Claire's comment, I didn't mean for it to seem that there were no foxes in the area. I just meant that they were scarce, and that she didn't see any. When Ryan was a fox, it was easier to find other foxes.
Or at least that was going through my head. I see how it sounds confusing. I should have made that a bit clearer.

Well, anyways, thanks for reading!

Amazing. Can't wait for the second installment!

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :D

You're welcome!
I also wrote a TF story, but it's not nearly as long as this...

I think I remember reading it. A robot TF, and not all that bad, I believe.

Well thanks!

This may well be the best TF story I have ever read, the details are great and you describe it so well, and the idea about it being for her to get magic creds is pretty cool (is not cruel to unsuspecting victims)

Thank you very much for that comment. This may be the best comment ever written. You complement me so well, and the idea you read the story and liked it so much is pretty cool.

you're very welcome

I woulnt car about getting turned into a fox, it would be the being used thing that would bother me (I'm like that)

An awesome TF story, and I can actually show it to friends(Yay PG-13!) :3

Why thank you! And please feel free to show it to your friends, I like attention!

Good story. You're an excellent writer.

Thanks! I'm glad you approve.

You are still the werewolf, though.

oh... I should have had you lynch'd ;sticks tongue out;

Oh man, this is great.

Coming from you, I'll take that as a huge compliment. Thanks!

...they have all five digits on thier front paws
Yes, I spoke only abour hindpaws. Because beginners usually think that they lack their fifth (little) finger (or that their 2 fingers are conjoined).

Fox's (and dog's) forepaw bones are nearly identical to our. They have same joints and tendons. Main difference is: their palms are longer and thinnier. And very thick pads on their fingertips and lower palms make grasping very hard. Their fingers are also connected by membrane, so it's hard to move them separately (but easier to swim). Foxes (nor dogs) have semi-retractable claws. They coud use them to climb trees.

I tried to help you creade feeling "how it felt to be a fox?". In a first story, he was mostly passenger in a animals body. Please, give him more control (but more troubles). He could move where wild fox afraid to move, use tools, avoid traps. But hunting without natural instincts and cub experience is very difficult.

Haha, I actually dig how he's a passenger in an animal's body, but that's just me.

I see where you are coming from. I tried to make it seem like he was more "trapped" than just a passenger, but I see where it came out like he was just part of the ride, and not really a prisoner. I do agree, though, that if he was in total control of his body it would make for a better read, as it can make for more interesting conflicts. In all honesty, I didn’t really think of that when I was writing this story. I will definitely make that a theme in an upcoming story. Thanks again for the critique, I really appreciate it.

Damn this rocked! I cant wait for part 2, that is if you havent posted it already and if you have...link meh :D

Part two is actually done... I just need to figure out a way to upload it. This weekend, most likely.

I cant wait! -chews on my tail in anxiety-

Its just the time to upload the part two (and, maybe, three)?