please comment just something to pass the time.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 841 x 1099px
File Size 259.3 kB
The face looks somewhat ok, but the rest of the body looks like it was drawn by a ten year old. This is just my honest opinion.
It's not because of the coloring, which looks rather nice on the blonde hair, but the torso looks messed up with the arms just added on (the elbows also look pretty bad). The legs are too thin and the tail looks like its broken (bent very far in one spot).
If I were you, I'd start sketching out the idea before considering coloring so that you can go back and erase. Work on symmetry, specifically in the torso and the position of the eyes.
It's not because of the coloring, which looks rather nice on the blonde hair, but the torso looks messed up with the arms just added on (the elbows also look pretty bad). The legs are too thin and the tail looks like its broken (bent very far in one spot).
If I were you, I'd start sketching out the idea before considering coloring so that you can go back and erase. Work on symmetry, specifically in the torso and the position of the eyes.
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