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The "i have trouble with the names" thing i have is getting better... but when it comes to tittle commissions. specially those that have like 1 year due! im really sorry folks! ; w ;
commission i did for
bear-paws which includes 
Shark-Blade
commission i did for
bear-paws which includes 
Shark-BladeCategory All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 529px
File Size 847.9 kB
Striations in the shark's right pectoral seem off. They are a mismatch to how the striations are forming in the left. It's a disparity that unbalances his chest symmetry.
The left-side shark lats "feathering" details are well-done. These exist but are extremely subtle on the Iksar right. They really deserve to be more pronounced, so they show up as well as the sharks, because those are HOT.
Extremely serious biceps develop a crease in the middle making them sort of B shaped. That is, capital B or figure 8 squished so the ends are attached to the ends of the arm. Now instead of making the crease all the way across the biceps, just partway, then you push up a high peak in the middle, almost triangular well less rounded than you have here. This is because one part of the biceps is almost bifurcating away from the other and making the peak.
Best refs I have for the creased biceps on my character are Echin:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8404167/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8353456/
Although you did do one that has something of this crease: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8307572/
The left-side shark lats "feathering" details are well-done. These exist but are extremely subtle on the Iksar right. They really deserve to be more pronounced, so they show up as well as the sharks, because those are HOT.
Extremely serious biceps develop a crease in the middle making them sort of B shaped. That is, capital B or figure 8 squished so the ends are attached to the ends of the arm. Now instead of making the crease all the way across the biceps, just partway, then you push up a high peak in the middle, almost triangular well less rounded than you have here. This is because one part of the biceps is almost bifurcating away from the other and making the peak.
Best refs I have for the creased biceps on my character are Echin:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8404167/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8353456/
Although you did do one that has something of this crease: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8307572/
No recuerdo haber visto ni bosquejos de este, pero tienes un control mucho más delicado sobre las masas y las formas. Me gusta mucho, has mejorado caleta.
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