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What's Real and What's Not: Color Came Back
by subzero12591
Traditional Artist
18 years ago
the second piece on my collection . . . it's a brighter day it seems and our character takes a stroll past people and witnesses things are changing for the better again . ..
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Dethfox
~dethfox
Yay!!! I like dis a lot! It was well put together. Although might I throw in a bit of critque by saying that the jumping into the sea part is unnessessary, it ends perfect at the color was back. But I mean OMG seriously I like this!
subzero12591
~subzero12591
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THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehe it seems like a lot of people are liking these poems . . .. My Aunt the English Major enjoyed it a lot . . . I like them all . . . . because they're from other stories but um Thank You Matt
Dethfox
~dethfox
u really shouldn't say peoples names, fake real or otherwise...
