Gotta say, not bad, remarkable actually, although if I remember "Making Comics" by Scott McCloud.... the reader should see a flow between the images, but as an artist, you should still be able to pick out the panels and be able to analyze them. Looking at this, the 5th panel worries me. It shows (whom I assume to be) Trillo grinning, which I get, but the next time we see his face, he's sad already, which to me feels like a pretty quick swift. I realize we had 3 panels, but none showed his face. I would either make him smirk lesser or I would have used the 7th panel, to also show his face, perhaps raising an eyebrow, looking down. This I think would generate a better flow here.

BUT SOME BIG COMIC ARTIST I AM! I write dumb scripts, do everything lazily and turned my serious comic into a comedy very quickly, because I figured "if it's bad, better laugh at how bad it is!". what you created here looks gorgeous, and is even without any dialogue! I realize that's a thing some do, but I always feel full of admiration for people that do it, because as expressive as I can make my characters, I still doubt I'd pull this off, so ... you have my fullest respect here. I just... saw the page and one thing caught my eye.... I'm sorry, I really didn't mean to sound harsh! This is great!

Not at all! Thanks for pointing it out c:
I really should consider how my comic flows more but I'm kinda just panicking and quickly trying to get it finished. I keep forgetting important little details. I'll have to try and remember for the last two pages!

You still do a really good job. My own comic feels like the characters are just pasted over repeating backgrounds.... which is kind of the case, heh