My first full commission! =D I like how it turned out ^___^ Only complaint I have about it is the fact that I made like 2 or 3 mistakes, and I need to work on my lighting. My favorite part of the pic goes to the Ritz box XD XD XD *spins*
Comments? Questions? Complaints? Critique? Any of the above is valued =D Thank you!
Comments? Questions? Complaints? Critique? Any of the above is valued =D Thank you!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / All
Species Kangaroo
Size 1280 x 945px
File Size 362 kB
very cute! only a couple tiny thing throw off of this one. one thing is roos only have three toes per foot. also, I think his legs could use a tad beefing out and the last thing I noticed was that it seemed like you didn't know what to do with the piece of wood you drew on the right side of the page. I am getting a view of looking through his window kinda perspective and seeing inside the room where there should be a wall seems off. Great work though! always take criticism with a grain of salt!
Thank you!...And I completely missed that, and the legs or the feet? As for the piece of wood its part of the window, but I suck at windows and I agree it just seems to be put there at random. And what do you mean by the wall seems off? Do you think its a bit too tilted? Please elaborate...that would be extremely helpful ^____^ And I have no idea what you mean by taking with a grain of salt XD *spins* But thank you! I'm definitely glad your telling me so I can work on this stoof X3
the leg areas could use a bit more musculature and that piece of wood on the left looks right at a distance and not in full view. What I mean by the wall being off is that if the wood is the window frame then there would be a section of the outside wall to the right of the right most piece of wood to where you wouldn't see the ritz box and such in the area. and what I mean by "take it with a grain of salt" is to not really worry too much on the criticism. hope that helps a lil more!
Damn! That's pretty awesome! Your colors are very vibrant and blend well. The perspective is a little bit off, but not so much that the viewer can't tell what you are trying to accomplish. His face came out excellent, as did his general form, and your composition is very interesting. Looking through a windowframe, perhaps?
Good stuff! *adds to Favorites*
Good stuff! *adds to Favorites*
Super cute!
It looks quite good, only thing is the perspective is a bit off and the lining up of things.
I'd advise taking a ruler and make your vanishing point or two and then have all the lines of the furniture and other objects line up with it.
The window, poster and floor are off and could be realined.
I want to say you'd see a bit more of the roo's legs although the arguement could be said that his tail is covering that view.
Still it seems like you'd see a little more of his bum.
If anything you might be able to adjust the perspective issues in photoshop!
Other wise, great coloring and values! Something that might help you is that value and lighting are NOT the same things.
I see alot of beautiful value but not much lighting. Value is a color to black. Lighting is a color to white.
Lighting also takes into account reflectivity. So if you have an object and a light shining on it, there will obviously be light from the source but also light reflecting off onto the other side bouncing back on to the object. And in that color too! So if the sun was shining and you were wearing a blue shirt, that blue would also be lightly bouncing back onto your skin as well as the "yellow" light from the sun.
The pose is very cute and natural! I like it quite a bit and your style is great too!
It looks quite good, only thing is the perspective is a bit off and the lining up of things.
I'd advise taking a ruler and make your vanishing point or two and then have all the lines of the furniture and other objects line up with it.
The window, poster and floor are off and could be realined.
I want to say you'd see a bit more of the roo's legs although the arguement could be said that his tail is covering that view.
Still it seems like you'd see a little more of his bum.
If anything you might be able to adjust the perspective issues in photoshop!
Other wise, great coloring and values! Something that might help you is that value and lighting are NOT the same things.
I see alot of beautiful value but not much lighting. Value is a color to black. Lighting is a color to white.
Lighting also takes into account reflectivity. So if you have an object and a light shining on it, there will obviously be light from the source but also light reflecting off onto the other side bouncing back on to the object. And in that color too! So if the sun was shining and you were wearing a blue shirt, that blue would also be lightly bouncing back onto your skin as well as the "yellow" light from the sun.
The pose is very cute and natural! I like it quite a bit and your style is great too!
Wow. That's EXTREMELY helpful!!!! I don't think I'd be able to adjust the pic in photoshop since...well...I suck at photoshop XD...and yea...I have major issues on lighting which I need to fix sometime lol... But I had no idea about most of this stuff your telling me o.o! So thanks for all the advice, tips, and critique!!!! *dances* ^___^
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