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Here's the second part of this --> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12122596/ Continuing on from where we last left off, Kibia insist that her tail is more fluffier by shoving it into Meda's face. Bad move. Meda then becomes enraged, taking her own tail, and giving Kibia a good whack, knocking her onto the ground. Meda becomes so enraged, that she's literally burning. <XDDD I think we all know who's tail is softer then. At least...I think so. <X3; Hope you all like the little series I put together. <=3
Category Artwork (Traditional) / All
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 1280 x 976px
File Size 242.9 kB
I see you've tried to go for dynamic poses for the action, but the characters look too stiff, as if they have no actual freedom over their own bodies actions. Not to mention, some of the posing is a little overdone, in which I'm saying, some of the limbs are bent a little to far for it to be recognizable, I've also noticed some of the anatomy is a little off, torso, and limbs for arms and legs come out a little short.
Not trying to put people down or make anyone look bad, because it's not an opinion, I'm just offering advice, so don't get angry at me for trying to help a fellow artist look at the mistakes to better themselves.
Not trying to put people down or make anyone look bad, because it's not an opinion, I'm just offering advice, so don't get angry at me for trying to help a fellow artist look at the mistakes to better themselves.
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