Oooh! I can't wait to read the next installment!

Stupid thing changed all your apostrophes into question marks, though...

Now this is pretty interesting. I think the style is a little bit more disjointed, probably due to the fact that you were stoned when you were writing it. Could use a little editing in that regard, though it is still legible. Just a little redundant at times. Coudl use a sentence or two removed. The ideas behind this piece seem more real to me though, like with the ohter piece you wrote it was playful and attempting to explain who you are as a fur/person, but this piece does away with any sort of explaining and just shows who you are. Sounds silly, like that whole show don't tell thing. But I think it works in this instance. I like the ideas in this a lot, and at times the execution is poignant and touching, though at other times is a little sloppy. Nothing that can't be fixed with a little editing. I think you should push this piece a little further. And maybe there are souls in everything, and maybe all that text and emotion we have poured into cyber space is making some sort of imprint on the world. However, maybe that imprint isn't on something that doesn't exist, like the internet itself, more with the peopel who interact with the internet? Anyway, I ramble. night!

Well this story is just one little Idea I have had. Yeah this is a very rough draft.

I also realized that the other thing about Zerox is very old, and needs to be scrapped. I have decided to take him in a less dark humor direction and moreof a utopin futureman comes to the past sort of thing. Rember, sci-fi is excessivly wordy at time, (see Issac asimov) but Im trying to be more like Bradbury in realizing that in the future, you dont need to know how everything works in order to use it.

Thanks for the comment, I need to work on this more. I loved the concept.