Boop! All read up. (: It sounds like a good start to the story - and quick to get onto the next part of her adventure. It reads a little different from the CC stuff - rather than a tense adventure it reads pretty well just casually, kinda like Hapo does. Here's to part two!

It means a lot that you were able to give the Ezil's reboot a go. Thanks so much for reading. *Snugs*

Ezil will read more like Hapo, because it was initially done years before the Creative Campaigns.

Adding to the fun in writing this is that I am doing all the work using my screen reading application. I try to repair some tab issues when I bring it to my main PC, but all the chapters will be (re)written from accessible laptop to semi-accessible PC.

Right now, I have over 30 of the chapters written. They just need a little "Dusting Off", if you will. I cleaned this one up to remove some fluff and focus on bringing out the family and their feelings.

If I might add, this work is going to be more challenging on a personal level than I at first thought. Mr. Foxtrot is meant to be a play-on my real father while Mrs. Foxtrot is like my mother. Thus, in essence, Bo is the me that once was. The me that never thought his sight could get worse. Thus, in writing this, I am recalling a lot of personal memories to ensure the integrity of the work while, overall, hopefully driving forward a good story and solid message.

My plan is to do a chapter a week. So, more fun is soon to come! Ezil is pretty fast paced, so it should keep being a fun, insightful, and entertaining read. My Snowdrop before there was a Snowdrop. :)

Hehe, I could tell pretty clearly it was a lot like your own mom and dad must'a been! Updating and making our old work more modern works pretty well so I'm sure it'll come out great. (: