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https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....5U-WVyggc/edit <<Gdocs link for the Word Doc impared.
Huh. I wrote this story in one day. Whoops, didn't mean to do that. Then again, I don't mean to do a lot of the things I do.
So, what can I say about this piece? Well, there's a reason it's called feelings. The feelings are mine, and I hope to share them. I wanted to get the feelings one particular friend gives me across.
This little nutshell came out from something he pointed out. Most likely, these two will become recurring when applicable. I like them too much. If it isn't obvious, I'm White, the pegasus (bigger than how he is in the picture, I swear), and my friend is Black, the bat pony.
My friend alluded that he wanted to be anonymous, so I won't directly say who it is. You may know him, you may not. This story isn't about how you see him, and it isn't even about how he sees me. It's how I see him.
Black is a little rough around the edges.
Black has a sense of humor, right, and wrong that other ponies don't always understand.
Black believes in what he believes in, and it's unlikely anypony will shake him of these.
Black will be brutally honest with you.
Black will give his opinion and advice.
Black doesn't quit on you if he knows you're worthwhile.
White couldn't ask for a better pony to know.
Huh. I wrote this story in one day. Whoops, didn't mean to do that. Then again, I don't mean to do a lot of the things I do.
So, what can I say about this piece? Well, there's a reason it's called feelings. The feelings are mine, and I hope to share them. I wanted to get the feelings one particular friend gives me across.
This little nutshell came out from something he pointed out. Most likely, these two will become recurring when applicable. I like them too much. If it isn't obvious, I'm White, the pegasus (bigger than how he is in the picture, I swear), and my friend is Black, the bat pony.
My friend alluded that he wanted to be anonymous, so I won't directly say who it is. You may know him, you may not. This story isn't about how you see him, and it isn't even about how he sees me. It's how I see him.
Black is a little rough around the edges.
Black has a sense of humor, right, and wrong that other ponies don't always understand.
Black believes in what he believes in, and it's unlikely anypony will shake him of these.
Black will be brutally honest with you.
Black will give his opinion and advice.
Black doesn't quit on you if he knows you're worthwhile.
White couldn't ask for a better pony to know.
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Horse
Size 120 x 62px
File Size 61 kB
Oh, don't you worry, he gets the blunt end of the stick. He just knows that it comes from a genuine interest in helping him, as opposed to the fragile egos of most others that crack under the weight of a harsh word. It helps that he's an intellectual equal as well.
And there are others would would attest to my capabilities as a friend, although they are spread across other screen names.
And there are others would would attest to my capabilities as a friend, although they are spread across other screen names.
Well, I don't not like you for making harsh critiques - not that you give critiques at all to my drawings actually, I honestly wouldn't mind some, at least I'd get more than the usual "oh so cute" and "oh so awesome" - more for the fact of you being arrogant about what you like and trying to make others like the same stuff because that's apparently much more awesome than having their own taste and opinion :)
I wouldn't mind finding out about your other side - the one seen in this fic for example - as well, so if you're up to it, maybe we could talk some on skype or something, trying to find out if we really hated or just had trouble understanding one another.
I wouldn't mind finding out about your other side - the one seen in this fic for example - as well, so if you're up to it, maybe we could talk some on skype or something, trying to find out if we really hated or just had trouble understanding one another.
To be frank, your art isn't bad enough to make me froth at the mouth like a pitbull tugging at his chain, but also not good enough for me to really feel invested. For the most part I think it's a matter of your style choice and it simply not appealing to me.
Eh, if you want to. dark.entrophy is my profile name.
Eh, if you want to. dark.entrophy is my profile name.
Well, I'm not sure if you remember but in one of your comments on derpibooru you said "Frankly, because it’s quality art. Shading, highlighting, dynamic pose, and is somewhat original. This is opposed to your skewed proportions, flat coloring, and stick-like posing. Also helps that it doesn’t feature a diaper that’s been shat in."
I got somewhat mad so I made a pic with shading, highlighting, dynamic pose, original - without flat coloring, stick-like posing and a shitty diaper.
Here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10910799/
I got somewhat mad so I made a pic with shading, highlighting, dynamic pose, original - without flat coloring, stick-like posing and a shitty diaper.
Here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10910799/
...and decided to have them smoking poison joke or whatever instead.
Their legs are still far too thin, especially Fluttershy's where the stick leg is popping out of that bulbous haunch. The exception to this is Rainbow's right hoof (the one holding the joint), which despite being further away from the viewer (and therefore supposed to be smaller in perspective) is the largest limb in the entire picture. Fluttershy's bottom seems to be fat, giving her a pear-shape look. The lines in the background are wiggly, which is a strange thing to see in an age of straight-line tools. What you have is something of an uncanny valley, approaching what the ponies look like but getting their proportions all wrong.
Their legs are still far too thin, especially Fluttershy's where the stick leg is popping out of that bulbous haunch. The exception to this is Rainbow's right hoof (the one holding the joint), which despite being further away from the viewer (and therefore supposed to be smaller in perspective) is the largest limb in the entire picture. Fluttershy's bottom seems to be fat, giving her a pear-shape look. The lines in the background are wiggly, which is a strange thing to see in an age of straight-line tools. What you have is something of an uncanny valley, approaching what the ponies look like but getting their proportions all wrong.
Pre: Ohmahgahd plz don't make this make me cry.
Post: I shouldn't read stories in a rush while half awake.
# Black "sounds like"... (as in only words), Tehbackup.
Post: I shouldn't read stories in a rush while half awake.
# Black "sounds like"... (as in only words), Tehbackup.
Black? What a mystique. What mystery.
I truthfully don't know who it could be, really. Then again, I don't know many of your friends, or many of the people on this site, for that matter.
A fantastic story, as always. And, oddly enough, I too, as some of the other commenters, am half-asleep, and I'm gonna probably go pass out now.
We all live in a yellow submarine...
yellow submarine...
yellow... submarine...
I truthfully don't know who it could be, really. Then again, I don't know many of your friends, or many of the people on this site, for that matter.
A fantastic story, as always. And, oddly enough, I too, as some of the other commenters, am half-asleep, and I'm gonna probably go pass out now.
We all live in a yellow submarine...
yellow submarine...
yellow... submarine...
"which white would swear on his left wing"
I don't think the 'S' should be there
I wasn't a huge fan of the diapering scene, but I loved the story all around. Other than the 'swear' part I think it was very well written. I love how you intertwined your real life with fantasy, it worked really well and made a good read.
I don't think the 'S' should be there
I wasn't a huge fan of the diapering scene, but I loved the story all around. Other than the 'swear' part I think it was very well written. I love how you intertwined your real life with fantasy, it worked really well and made a good read.
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