Mentally DethronedSitting peacefully on a comfortable pile of cushions in her elegantly-designed bedroom was the kind-hearted and gracious ruler of all Equestria -- Princess Celestia the Pegasus unicorn pony known as an Alicorn. Celestia had a very pale lavender body and multi-coloured pastel mane and tail. She was wearing a dazzling golden tiara, collar and horse shoes. It was late at night and she was reading a magical scroll sent by her most faithful student, Twilight Sparkle by aid of a flicking candle light. While she was reading what lesson her student and her friends learnt today, a warm smile spread across her face. Celestia was delighted that Twilight was quickly learning what she set off to discover in the first place.
The princess was so distracted with her reading that she failed to notice that her window had begun to slowly open. A small, long tailed figure cloaked in shadows swiftly flew in from outside and dived under Celestia's bed. A soft breeze was now blowing through the gap in the window, lightly pushing the curtains into a gentle flutter. Celestia glanced up from her reading and looked over at the window.
"That's odd. I could have sworn I closed that window." She said to herself, getting to her feet. Celestia took a short walk over to the window and used her magic to not only close it, but also lock it using the latch. "There, that's better."
She turned around to head back towards her pillows but was shocked to discover that someone else was currently sitting upon them. It was a creature she had never seen before in her extremely long lifetime. Its eyes were an emerald green and it had a tuft of pink hair on its head. It was none other than the evil-minded Mew called Shinka. He was sitting in a very lazy and relaxed, manner and smoking on a long kiseru. His tail – which was longer than that of a normal Mew – was leisurely swaying from side to side.
Celestia was usually a caring individual who welcomed people with her respectful regency. However, she did not approval of this creature’s intrusion into her room without the proper authority. She took a few steps across the carpet and stood over the Mew. As her shadow cast over him, Shinka’s eyes curiously rolled upwards to glance up at her.
“Who are you and what are you doing in my room?” she inquired, her facial expression showing grimace, toned down under her own self-control. Her voice was gentle, but there was a hint of seriousness to it.
The Mew’s response was an amused chuckle, “I assume you’re the one known as Princess Celestia. Forgive me if I am saying this too late, Princess, but you are as majestic as I pictured you being.” He complimented, a small cocky smirk curling up on his face.
Being a well adored princess through the whole of Equestria, Celestia always appreciated the kind words of others and in return, she always made her gratitude known. However, Shinka’s identity and presence were a far more concerning matter than any formal greetings.
“I’ll ask you again: Who are you and for what reason have you intruded into my room?” Celestia asked in the exact same tone as before.
Shinka sat up and levitated into the air, meeting the princess eye-to-eye. There was an unnerving glint to his emerald green eyes that sparkled for a second before he bowed his head courteously at Celestia. “My name is Shinka, my dear princess.” He answered, lifting his head back up to its original position. “I come from a place far away from what you know to seek an audience with you.”
“While I am always honoured to meet a foreigner, Shinka, I am afraid now is not the time for such things.” Celestia said back, managing a friendly smile across her bright, royal complexion. “And since you come on good intensions, you shall be escorted outside by my royal guards without any hostility. If you wish to arrange a meeting with me, Shinka, I’ll be more than happy to see you tomorrow.”
Celestia walked past Shinka and headed in the direction of the door at the other end of the room. With a swift swish, Shinka appeared hovering before the princess, starling her a bit.
“Forgive me, Princess, but my purpose here isn’t as noble as you stated it to be.” Shinka informed her, his voice was now carrying signs of being dark and ominous. “You’re a simply stunning creature, Celestia...” he commented, placing his tail under the princess’s chin.
Celestia put on a nervous smile accompanied with a chuckle of equal calibre. “”Why, thank you, Shinka. Your words are very munificent.” She said to him, lifting up her chin and gently brushing Shinka’s tail to one side with her muzzle. “Now, I think it’s time for you to leave.”
“On the contrary, princess,” Shinka said in a quiet, yet sinister tone of voice, closing his eyes. “I’d rather stay right here with you. I do, after all, have business with you.” With that unsettling statement uttered, he reopened his eyes, revealing that they were now pulsating with green spirals of two different shades which proceeded to glow and flow directly into the eyes of the princess.
“What treachery is this??” Celestia angrily protested, already feeling the hypnotic force brought on by the spirals attempting to take over her mind.
“I know someone of your almighty stature will have the best mental resistance of all the race of ponies, so I will give you no mercy.” Shinka sinisterly declared, powering up his hypnotic power as soon as his sentence had finished.
“I shall not allow myself to become your servant, Shinka!” Celestia boldly declared. Her wings spread out on either side, each began to glow a heavenly blue.
There were green spirals already pulsating in the eyes of the majestic horse; spinning around at the same exact speed as the ones in Shinka’s eyes. However, her will was far from being broken into submission. A surge of white magical energy flowed up her horn, instantly forming into a sphere as soon as they reached the tip.
“Planning to strike me down with your omnipotent magic, princess?” Shinka inquired, raising a wider smirk as well as his right hand. “You do realize that even you have no chance of fighting me back?”
In a blink of an eye, Shinka created his own bright orb at the end of his hand. It was the move known as Aura Sphere with an image of a spiral swirling on an endless pattern on the front. Before Celestia had the chance to cast the magic she had gathered up, Shinka shot out his hypnotic Aura Sphere, striking her in forehead. Instead of causing her pain, it was absorbed into her skin. At first nothing seemed to happen. All Celestia felt was a slightly tingly feeling in the spot where the Aura Sphere struck. All of a sudden, her brain received a mighty blast from the hypnotic Aura Sphere which had found its way into her cerebral systems.
“What an unhanded trick, Shinka!” Celestia furiously protested, gritting her teeth. The magical glow positioned on the end of her horn was still present, but had lost its once powerful glow. “I will not allow you to win!”
“Your determination is admirable, Celestia. I would have expected no less from a God-like princess such as you.” Shinka complimented with a sadistic smirk. “Unfortunately for you, however, my status as a legendary grants me almost unlimited power.”
Celestia tried her best to fight back against the hypnotic onslaught, but even her, with all her might, could not overcome the commanding waves of pleasure washing away her will. The orb of magical energy started to dimmer, shrinking in size until it was no more than a thing of the past. Her wings lost their godly glow and had fallen back to her relaxed sides. Celestia now stood as silent as she was pleasured by Shinka’s overpowering, mind controlling powers. A calm, slightly-curled smile was spread across her peaceful complexion with her green spiral eyes swirling at a slowed down pace. The sun-controlling, well-loved princess of all Equestria was now under the complete control of the diabolical Shinka.
“Now princess, state your name, status and tell me who you serve.” Shinka questioned, levitating up his kiseru from the cushions and into his hand.
“My name is Princess Celestia and I rule over all of Equestria. I serve only you, Master Shinka.” Celestia responded without a delay in her usual elegant voice, bowing her head.
After taking a single, leisurely puff, Shinka was ready for the next step of his sneaky plan. “Celestia,” he began, his tone quiet but still quite ominous. “Your position as ruler over all the lands is now over. “You have been downgraded all the way down to the level of a mindless slave.” He took a moment to blow a plume of smoke into the air. “MY mindless slave.” The evil Mew concluded.
The words spoken by Shinka dug deep into Celestia’s suggestible brain. Her green eye spirals gained an alluring, soothing radiance to them.
“My position as ruler of Equestria is now over.” Celestia said, accepting the words spoken by her master as the truth, “I have been downgraded all the way down to the level of a mindless slave,” she paused for a second, “…your mindless slave.”
Shinka curled up her tail, placing the end of it under his slave’s chin, giving it a loving rub. “You hated being a ruler of Equestria…it was such a stressing job for even a god-like being such as yourself.” He spoke, inserting more of his words into Celestia’s brain, reprogramming it even more. “You don’t want to receive praise, you prefer to give praise. You want to worship and praise your master as his loyal slave.”
Celestia breathed a relaxed sigh, her brain continually adapting to her new and improved lifestyle. “I hated being a ruler of Equestria…It was such a stressing job for even a god-like being such as myself. I don’t want to receive praise, I prefer to give praise.” Her smile curled up even more, “I want to worship and praise you master as your loyal slave.”
Shinka’s sinful smirk stretched upwards a tiny bit more. “Celestia, as well as your master, you adore female horses and Pokemon.” He said, running his hand gently down her cheeks. “You love their bodies…from head to toe. One of your purposes as my slave is to hunt down female creatures of my pickings and hypnotize them.”
“I adore female horses and Pokemon.” Celestia mindlessly parroted, despite having little knowledge about the many species of Pokemon out there. “I love their bodies…from head to toe. One of my purposes as your slave is to hunt down female creatures of your pickings and hypnotize them.”
The reprogramming of the ex-princess of Equestria mind had now come to a satisfactory end. Shinka floated a few aerial spaces back and Celestia saluted her Mew master in the utmost respect with her left wing. She was ready for orders; orders she would carry out without hesitations or complaints of any kind. Her eyes will forever be populated with the swirling green spirals and her loyalty to Shinka shall remain unbreakable.
“Master Shinka, what are your orders?” Celestia inquired, sounding very much like an army cadet addressing their commanding officer.
“Well, there is this magnificent Pokemon known as Reshiram…” Shinka began…
-END- I wrote this last year by the request of my friend and it’s the first MLP FIM story I’ve ever wrote. I was still relatively new to the show when I wrote this, so some scenes may come off as inaccurate.
Category Story / All
Species Horse
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 18.1 kB
Listed in Folders
Not just that. it gets boring by now. I get it, a powerful Mew who mind controls everyone. Why? Because it is utter fun? By now it is just the same in green with those stories. Random character gets mind controled, turned into bisexual milf for the pervert and that is it. A bit of variation sometimes would be nice with the idea or why the fuck he does it to every random character he encounters. Heck,by now I wish some mind controlers would just get punched in the face already just so that their status as "undefeatable villain sue" would stop.
As for that thing, idea for a sequel: Discord just turns the guy into a hypno bitch cause by now he dares to play on his turf.
As for that thing, idea for a sequel: Discord just turns the guy into a hypno bitch cause by now he dares to play on his turf.
Someone is a little bit frustrated here due he wasted a couple of life due reading...
You know, you could have prevented that when you checked the tags. The word 'Mew' is just there (luckily Molo tags his stories very properly), so the chance that it was about the undefeatable Shinka is significantly high.
You know, you could have prevented that when you checked the tags. The word 'Mew' is just there (luckily Molo tags his stories very properly), so the chance that it was about the undefeatable Shinka is significantly high.
FA+

Comments