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Kalo_WoodBorn In this story Jeff goes to a spa for a massage but gets a different and quite interesting massage than your normal massage
This one turned out longer than I expected, and I had to cut out a few parts because I don't initially like writing long vore stories, I usually like them short sweet simple and to the point, so Im sorry Kalo if your disappointed by this, I tried but lately I've been feeling....down and crummy so it's probably not my best work but then again none of my work is good. Anyways I hope you enjoy but most likely you wont, that is all for now
Kalo_WoodBorn In this story Jeff goes to a spa for a massage but gets a different and quite interesting massage than your normal massageThis one turned out longer than I expected, and I had to cut out a few parts because I don't initially like writing long vore stories, I usually like them short sweet simple and to the point, so Im sorry Kalo if your disappointed by this, I tried but lately I've been feeling....down and crummy so it's probably not my best work but then again none of my work is good. Anyways I hope you enjoy but most likely you wont, that is all for now
Category Story / Vore
Species Canine (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 16.2 kB
You do have a way of talking yourself down. You don't need to be so harsh, though. True, your writing style could use a little improvement, but you've got the content and imagery, which are more important. (At 17, I had none of it. Anything I wrote was atrocious.) I did notice a couple small parts missing, but I was also concerned I had given you too much to write, so don't worry about it. Really, where it comes to vore, I've always had more of a passing interest than a deep enthusiasm, but, by the end of the story, I was left wishing a place like this actually existed. Nice job. :3
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