Awesome! i read both chapters and this is a really good story. are ya going to make another chapter?

Thank you for the comments. Yes, I plan on continuing this story as an ongoing project here. Currently working on chapter 4 and have chapters 5 through 9 already planned out. It is nice to know that people are reading this and enjoying my work. If you have any suggestions or comments on things that you would either like to see happen in upcoming chapters please feel free to send me an email with the details. I am always willing to try and add reader suggestions into the story as long as they fit inside the personality of the characters. thanks again for the post and I hope to have the next chapter up really soon. ^^

KobyFennec

Welp, gotta say this had really unexpected moments. Very nicely written though. I enjoyed it much.

Now that they are back to civilization, makes me wonder whats to come...

In other similar news, I liked the dreaming-then-life threatening change sequence. Pretty dramatic. =)

thank you for the wonderful comment. I'm glad you enjoyed my writings here, I just hope the following chapters also meet with your approval.

i am really not to sure what to say apart from i liked this one too hehe, yous are really goods ^_^

Yay!!!! read chapter 3, poor spark, she really got hurt :(, though rick was quite a nurse, taking care of her, man it was nice to see him buy her freedom at a high cost, almost shedding her uncertainy toward him. Loved the story