I liked how this chapter was basically a breather after the whole mess in the previous one and the upcoming boss battle in the next one it seems. The height-measuring contest was a cute little aside as was the whole speed wedding to avoid the curse.

I'm suddenly rooting for no more of the team to get killed after that bit of foreshadowing. Hopefully they're able to fry the eagle without any serious damage. And here's hoping poor Larry has a growth spurt to catch up to his new bride at least a little at some point :-P

I was hoping that I would not bore people with this chapter. And I like how you refer to the upcoming fight as a boss battle.^^

Don't think that the eagle will be the last obstacle to overcome though. There are still a few more things that I have in store that they all need to overcome.

The speed-wedding was pretty great. I also like Larry, he's quite fun ^^ . Lookin forward to the big boss battle. I recon it'll be awesome if previous efforts are anything to go by. Keep it up!!! : D

I'm glad you thought that about the wedding since I was worried about how people would take it. And I will definitely try to make the upcoming battle interesting.

Hmm... I didn't know you did a sci-fi :) but I am disappointed in that I don't know where the other chapters are, unless they are set to "mature" levels :(.
Can you e-mail me them or re-upload or something please Neopuc?

A lot of the chapters are set to mature and a few are set to adult levels. There is no actual sex in this story but there is some adult language, violent content, and one chapter where sex is implied but not actually described. I had been rating all of the chapters at least mature due to the overall content of the story, but I have recently decided to rate all of the chapters for their individual content.

But I suppose I could email them to you if you want. I really don't consider the content of the story anything worse than what you could find in many books found in a bookstore.

You should probably just issue a warning at the start of the story and in the comments then. Bear in mind that the mature content is limited to those 18+, so if you don't think your work deserves an 18 tag then don't set it to mature just issue normal warnings to those who may be offended etc. :P

Of course I myself am going to turn 18 in September and can 'legally' set my account to view mature content so such things won't be a problem at all for me personally, however you may still want to be more resonable in your use of the mature content filter for your other readers .

I am considering that and I just might do it in the future.

Brilliant work as usual. I am a bit disappointed that I can't view the other chapters because of my age.

I just made a few of the chapter mature or adult for adult language and violence. There is only one chapter with implied sex in it, but I have a hard time considering a story mature or adult just because of sexual related material.

I'm glad you like what you have been able to view though.