*yipes* talk about being put in your place.

this is the quality of writing I've been striving for.

I've never been much for the herbivora crowd, but it's amazing how a last paragraph can redouble ones attention and send your mind realling.

good work good sir, thank you for sharing

That's high praise- thank you!

you know after some rereading I realize every one of the focal characters was one of your established characters from your other stories... your REALLY good.

You may be the first to notice! I like to think that they all inhabit the same little universe. :)

Can honestly say that I really liked that one quite a bit. So well done with how lusciously obese that rabbit was getting without being overt about it; not my strongest suit. Really well done :3

Thanks very much!

I must say I'm impressed with this story. The descriptive language was well written but didn't go overboard, and the detail of what the bunny was thinking was there without it becoming boron halfway through. Also, I don't really like stories that do time jumps as much as this one, but I have to admit I did enjoy it. It didn't interrupt the flow of the language, and I really like your writing style. Simply super~

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Well done! Great discriptions and ending!

Thank you, sir!

I'm not usually one for intentional gaining, but I AM a sucker for chubby buns. This was very well written, I only wish we'd gotten more scenes in between. (In short, I'm left wanting more, which is a VERY good thing. ) Well Done!

Happy to hear you enjoyed it. I like this rabbit, so I may revisit him someday!

The other day, my friend decided that he needed to really motivate me to put on weight...so he sent me a link to this story. I've been gorging like crazy since, and felt more dedicated after seeing how dedicated Buck had to be in this story. So thank you very much for putting my belly back on track, awesome story bro!!

Ah! Glad to provide some inspiration. Feel free to have seconds on Buck's behalf.