Love this

Love the mood! The character design is great as well. :)

"I draw the shades and close the door"-
I draw the shades and close the door
those I loved have done before
What for?! how come?!
no one else can hear the drum
this cadance beat inside my heart
it takes my soul
I'm wrenched apart
I draw the shades and close the door
the journey has soaked my shirt and fur
where pride once reigned
now whimpers stagger in
I show my soul only through dry eyes
for they too have fled the scene
and taken their salty cries into the night
So here I lay blind into the night
behind shades I've drawn and doors shut tight

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actually it's :
'Cause I can't take anymore
I'll draw the shades and close the door
Everything's not alright and I would rather"

And as the sun went down
We ended up on the ground
I heard the train shake the windows
You screamed over the sound

And as we owned this night
I'll put your body to the test with mine
This love was out of control
Tell me where did it go?

qouting a song? or the lute of the soul?

I wished only to go where my mood sent the flow
I like your style its holds brighter suns
I'll be glad to know if no harm was done
so take this apology signed and sealed
for I very well might have ruined your zeal
this piece it hols my mind
because once I saw the love
it had hidden low beneath
the outer layer was just a husk
I was only intending to do my part
take this note in good mind
to spread grand verse derived from inspiring art
for tonight the muze has a fixed grasp on my heart