I wrote this in like an hour. Heavily influenced by
norithics
Plot synopsis:
Guy (me), goes to doctors' office because of headaches, and gets turned into a robot.
norithicsPlot synopsis:
Guy (me), goes to doctors' office because of headaches, and gets turned into a robot.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Feline (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 8.8 kB
Wonderful story dude. Interesting turning into a robot there.
It brings up the old SeaLab question: "Would you put your brain in a robot body?"
And to anwser that. I would totally put my brain in a robotic furry body... but I would want a fox body and I would just put fur on it.
It brings up the old SeaLab question: "Would you put your brain in a robot body?"
And to anwser that. I would totally put my brain in a robotic furry body... but I would want a fox body and I would just put fur on it.
Nice! I had a problem with the formatting, though. All the quotation marks show up as question marks, so it was a little disconcerting at first.
I'll be honest.
Great idea, good start, but I think it kind of just.. fell in too fast. You fell asleep, but I think had you a reason to fall asleep, it would be a little stronger, like they were pumping sleeping gas in it, or you drank a bit of water in the waiting room laced with something, or something like that...
I like it otherwise!
I'll be honest.
Great idea, good start, but I think it kind of just.. fell in too fast. You fell asleep, but I think had you a reason to fall asleep, it would be a little stronger, like they were pumping sleeping gas in it, or you drank a bit of water in the waiting room laced with something, or something like that...
I like it otherwise!
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