So, Here's the end of act one, and still not any feedback yet :D
Oh well.
Anyway, the end of act one! If nobody reads it, there probably won't be an act two! At least, not for a little while, anyway.
Any and all criticism is welcomed! Just don't be too harsh! (Why do I feel the need to include that? The internet, that's why.)
Oh well.
Anyway, the end of act one! If nobody reads it, there probably won't be an act two! At least, not for a little while, anyway.
Any and all criticism is welcomed! Just don't be too harsh! (Why do I feel the need to include that? The internet, that's why.)
Category Story / Miscellaneous
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Size 120 x 120px
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