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So, this is my entre for 
where we have to draw and explain why our OC would be a good Mate for Shooting Star Tempest!
1) About Dream Wild (you have to know about the girl, dont you?)
2) the Relasion Ship
3) a little story (Because of course...i like to write)
Dream Wild is a really quiet girl or that it seems at the distance, she is usually drawing or writing stories, always curious she looks at other ponies by the distance and gets nervous when they approach her and she feels intrigued or a like about them (if she doesnt care about them, instead she can be quite cold). Her nervous-self will dissapear soon enough she find comfortable being herself with other ponies and start actind dorky and even flirty -playing mostly-. In a negative way she often has self steem problems, always thinking she is not good enought and sometimes, sometimes her imagination takes her mind just to scare her about the future, also she can become a little bit violent when somebody is pressing her or screaming her truths that she doesnt want to hear
Her cutie mark: is a chibi wing and a feather who is making a path of red ink. It can be a drawing or a writing
Ability: Based on her imagination she can create fanfics, drawings, stories. Etc
About her Magic Is mostly to create illusions, i mean: to create something that it isnt real but you can see/hear anyway. She use it mostly to help herself to describe a characters but it can be used to protect herself. Ilusions cannot harm (since they are not corporeal) but they they can be quite scaring (she can create, for example: a roaring and angry dragon) and makes other ponies/creatures ran away
The negative about her magic It can be exhausting to create something as complex as a dragon and give them "life" for long periods of time. Plus: if the other person see through the ilusions it wont be scared anymore, not matter how realistic is it...and then she would have problems xD
Other Drawing about DW:
Writing: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/10272903/
Going to the gala: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/10718314/
Dark Side/ Magic playing with her mind: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/10426731/
(X-phenya is called her dark side, she DONT have schizoid....is mostly like the episode when discord attacked the mane 6 and they become grey-ish? Well like that)
At first i think she culd be quite shy around Shooting Star actually paying him for him to help her with her special somepony (Him, but shh that he doesnt know). But with the passing months she will become more comfortable not only with him but with herself because he will help her in that way. I think both of them are quiet type ponies who would like to be dorky-playing around friends and that how they will compliment themself. Standing when someone else is trying to break the other down.
Story time!
-But...how im gonna help you if i dont know who is your special somepony?
-Trust me, is better - her voice was low and she was looking at the ground like if something interesting was gonna grow on it - if i tell now who he is, i will get nervous everytime we talk, i will not tell you everything in fear that you will go and tell him
- But i wouldn`t-
- I know- she cuts it while kicking the ground- And still my mind keep pushing diferent scenarios that wont let me sleep at night with the idea that he might know, one way or another, and be disgusted with the idea of someone like me liking him -she gives a big kick to the ground hurting her front leg but taking no care about it - sometimes is not so good having this wild mind of mine
The black coal smile know the feeling that sometimes your hability and mark seems to play against you-
-...well, i have never done this before but i think we should start working on your confidence cause you are not as bad as those thoughts tells you- he smiles at the soft cream pony and flop his wings trying to catch her attention and he does. She looks at him -barely, by the corner of her purple eyes-and smiles appears on her lips - yeah thats better, you have to look to ponys in their eyes - she just nods, feeling lighthead just looking at his sky blue eyes
It has been 2 months since that encounter and still, Dreams refuse to let him know who is her speacial somepony and they started a game where he will try to guess who is basing just in how she is and how well he knows her by know
- Big Mac?
- Nup - says she shaking her head with energy
- Blackhooves?
- Dont think so...Nou-
- Rarity? - is not unusual she ask for females, long ago he thought that maybe she wasnt in to males and that what keeping her quiet but still, he havent guessed the pony of her life
- Seriously? - she rolls her eyes playfully. ¿Rarity? They cannot be more opposite!
- Hey! im running out of options! - he flops his wings like if he were angry but they both know that he isnt and just go back to their lessons about how is always a good thing to make them laught
It takes 4 months, meanning 16 lessons, for her to be ready to confront her somepony and give her the love letter she has written -After all, she is a writter isnt she?- throught the entire course , erasing, writing and erasing again. Looking for the exact words and saying them at loud in her room to feel them roll off her tongue just to see if they "sound" right, if they give the emotion that was necesary.
But first, she needs the approval of her master and because of that, the last day she sits properly and take a glass of water -and a pill to stay calm- (But shh with that) and start reading the letter, making the pauses and enphasis necesary, using just her soft voice that is almost a tender whisper.
She ends ratter quickly, the letter is no long because after all there is no much to say that it wasnt already been told. This are just words, excuses of what is already visible
- Wow Dream - her master stand up and with him, her - that was incredible, it gets the emotions and its seems so sincere....- he has a proud smile in his lips and somehow in her eyes is a glance of sadness - Well now, Run like wind Dreamwild! - they both laugh - take it with you to your special one.
She fold with great care the card again on the envelope and...
hand him the card using her magic.
Open ending because i dont know if he accept her love or not, that would be if i win or not the contest. If not...or well i have fun drawing this and thats always something important^^
PS: She scratch a BIT the ground...that's how nervous she is
Shooting Star:
Dream Wild:
Art:
where we have to draw and explain why our OC would be a good Mate for Shooting Star Tempest!1) About Dream Wild (you have to know about the girl, dont you?)
2) the Relasion Ship
3) a little story (Because of course...i like to write)
Dream Wild is a really quiet girl or that it seems at the distance, she is usually drawing or writing stories, always curious she looks at other ponies by the distance and gets nervous when they approach her and she feels intrigued or a like about them (if she doesnt care about them, instead she can be quite cold). Her nervous-self will dissapear soon enough she find comfortable being herself with other ponies and start actind dorky and even flirty -playing mostly-. In a negative way she often has self steem problems, always thinking she is not good enought and sometimes, sometimes her imagination takes her mind just to scare her about the future, also she can become a little bit violent when somebody is pressing her or screaming her truths that she doesnt want to hear
Her cutie mark: is a chibi wing and a feather who is making a path of red ink. It can be a drawing or a writing
Ability: Based on her imagination she can create fanfics, drawings, stories. Etc
About her Magic Is mostly to create illusions, i mean: to create something that it isnt real but you can see/hear anyway. She use it mostly to help herself to describe a characters but it can be used to protect herself. Ilusions cannot harm (since they are not corporeal) but they they can be quite scaring (she can create, for example: a roaring and angry dragon) and makes other ponies/creatures ran away
The negative about her magic It can be exhausting to create something as complex as a dragon and give them "life" for long periods of time. Plus: if the other person see through the ilusions it wont be scared anymore, not matter how realistic is it...and then she would have problems xD
Other Drawing about DW:
Writing: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/10272903/
Going to the gala: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/10718314/
Dark Side/ Magic playing with her mind: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/10426731/
(X-phenya is called her dark side, she DONT have schizoid....is mostly like the episode when discord attacked the mane 6 and they become grey-ish? Well like that)
At first i think she culd be quite shy around Shooting Star actually paying him for him to help her with her special somepony (Him, but shh that he doesnt know). But with the passing months she will become more comfortable not only with him but with herself because he will help her in that way. I think both of them are quiet type ponies who would like to be dorky-playing around friends and that how they will compliment themself. Standing when someone else is trying to break the other down.
Story time!
-But...how im gonna help you if i dont know who is your special somepony?
-Trust me, is better - her voice was low and she was looking at the ground like if something interesting was gonna grow on it - if i tell now who he is, i will get nervous everytime we talk, i will not tell you everything in fear that you will go and tell him
- But i wouldn`t-
- I know- she cuts it while kicking the ground- And still my mind keep pushing diferent scenarios that wont let me sleep at night with the idea that he might know, one way or another, and be disgusted with the idea of someone like me liking him -she gives a big kick to the ground hurting her front leg but taking no care about it - sometimes is not so good having this wild mind of mine
The black coal smile know the feeling that sometimes your hability and mark seems to play against you-
-...well, i have never done this before but i think we should start working on your confidence cause you are not as bad as those thoughts tells you- he smiles at the soft cream pony and flop his wings trying to catch her attention and he does. She looks at him -barely, by the corner of her purple eyes-and smiles appears on her lips - yeah thats better, you have to look to ponys in their eyes - she just nods, feeling lighthead just looking at his sky blue eyes
It has been 2 months since that encounter and still, Dreams refuse to let him know who is her speacial somepony and they started a game where he will try to guess who is basing just in how she is and how well he knows her by know
- Big Mac?
- Nup - says she shaking her head with energy
- Blackhooves?
- Dont think so...Nou-
- Rarity? - is not unusual she ask for females, long ago he thought that maybe she wasnt in to males and that what keeping her quiet but still, he havent guessed the pony of her life
- Seriously? - she rolls her eyes playfully. ¿Rarity? They cannot be more opposite!
- Hey! im running out of options! - he flops his wings like if he were angry but they both know that he isnt and just go back to their lessons about how is always a good thing to make them laught
It takes 4 months, meanning 16 lessons, for her to be ready to confront her somepony and give her the love letter she has written -After all, she is a writter isnt she?- throught the entire course , erasing, writing and erasing again. Looking for the exact words and saying them at loud in her room to feel them roll off her tongue just to see if they "sound" right, if they give the emotion that was necesary.
But first, she needs the approval of her master and because of that, the last day she sits properly and take a glass of water -and a pill to stay calm- (But shh with that) and start reading the letter, making the pauses and enphasis necesary, using just her soft voice that is almost a tender whisper.
She ends ratter quickly, the letter is no long because after all there is no much to say that it wasnt already been told. This are just words, excuses of what is already visible
- Wow Dream - her master stand up and with him, her - that was incredible, it gets the emotions and its seems so sincere....- he has a proud smile in his lips and somehow in her eyes is a glance of sadness - Well now, Run like wind Dreamwild! - they both laugh - take it with you to your special one.
She fold with great care the card again on the envelope and...
hand him the card using her magic.
Open ending because i dont know if he accept her love or not, that would be if i win or not the contest. If not...or well i have fun drawing this and thats always something important^^
PS: She scratch a BIT the ground...that's how nervous she is
Shooting Star:
Dream Wild:
Art:
Category All / All
Species Horse
Size 914 x 575px
File Size 280.7 kB
Damned FA that made me miss this one ! >_<
Fortunately, I checked the comments and found I didn't received an alert to tell me you've submited an entry ! Damn FA ! >_<
That's both a cute story and drawing ! Woah, I greet the work and efforts you put on all this. I'm impressed ! Great job ! >_<
And it's perfect, this way we can learn a lot about Dream Wild and it's very important to decide if she could be the perfect mate for ShootingStar or not. ^^
Thank you for all the details about her ! And for this adorable and very interesting story ! That really could happen because you did a good job in respecting ShootingStar's personality ! ^^
Oh and, Dream Wild's personality and magic abilities are truly interesting. ^^
One more time, thank you so much for joining this contest ! Your entry is so cuuuuuuuuute ! ^________^
Now all we can do is cross our fingers for Dream Wild and wish her good luck ! Because I won't be the only one to decide who will win ! >_<
Fortunately, I checked the comments and found I didn't received an alert to tell me you've submited an entry ! Damn FA ! >_<
That's both a cute story and drawing ! Woah, I greet the work and efforts you put on all this. I'm impressed ! Great job ! >_<
And it's perfect, this way we can learn a lot about Dream Wild and it's very important to decide if she could be the perfect mate for ShootingStar or not. ^^
Thank you for all the details about her ! And for this adorable and very interesting story ! That really could happen because you did a good job in respecting ShootingStar's personality ! ^^
Oh and, Dream Wild's personality and magic abilities are truly interesting. ^^
One more time, thank you so much for joining this contest ! Your entry is so cuuuuuuuuute ! ^________^
Now all we can do is cross our fingers for Dream Wild and wish her good luck ! Because I won't be the only one to decide who will win ! >_<
hahaha the good thing is that you find it anyway! n_n im really glad that you liked the story and the drawing and mostly that you could understand it xD sometimes i dont trust myself with the english writing cause i lack of some words but...trying anyway is fun. Anyway thanks you for letting us have the opportunity to participate in this contest and ...well now i just have to wait to see how everything goes!
Yay ! ^__^
Ah don't worry, I'm french ! My english isn't perfect too and I lack vocabulary so badly sometimes ! So I can perfectly understand your problem !
And I had no problem to read and understand the descriptions and story ! It was really pleasant to read ! ^^
Aw, you're the most welcome ! I'm the one who feel really lucky to see all these pretty cool ideas. ^^
Yes ! Stay strong ! There isn't a lot of time to wait now ! >_<
Ah don't worry, I'm french ! My english isn't perfect too and I lack vocabulary so badly sometimes ! So I can perfectly understand your problem !
And I had no problem to read and understand the descriptions and story ! It was really pleasant to read ! ^^
Aw, you're the most welcome ! I'm the one who feel really lucky to see all these pretty cool ideas. ^^
Yes ! Stay strong ! There isn't a lot of time to wait now ! >_<
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